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It took me slightly more than a month, but I've finished the second chapter. Criticism is always welcome! Chapter 2: Other Invitations The school bell rings. The exams are over. Everyone in class seems happy and relieved. I think I am happy too, but I'm not sure. There's only a couple days of class ...

Thanks for all the kind responses! That's good Rin there. Somehow fairly well in character, interesting to think about, fascinating to listen to. Nice! Edit: read through a couple times more and decided I liked your Akio and Takashi as well. :) brythain is the first person to comment my story! Yay! ...

Chapter 1: Invitation I am painting a butterfly. The wings give me some trouble. Maybe I should ask the Butterfly Whisperer what butterfly wings are like, before she leaves the school. I don't know how to feel about that. I've already collected her and she isn't very interesting, a bit like my fell...

This is my first fan fiction, and it's a story I've had in my mind for a while. It's a continuation of Lilly's bad/neutral ending, similar to After the Dream and Developments (very original idea, I know), who have been a major source of inspiration for me. The catch is that it doesn't concern Lilly ...

First things first: damn it Blank, you write fast!

I am not sure I have completely understood what was going on, but it's a fun read nonetheless.

Mirage_GSM wrote:It's signed by Mike Inel - the guy who did the video sequences for KS.

The style did look familiar. Thanks!

I like it! No much else to say, really. It's a cute little story, and it leaves you with a nice, fuzzy feeling. The picture is also pretty cute. Who is the artist?

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?! I'm still recovering from George R.R. Martin... A girl with pink hair and drills stepped up to Hisao. She thrust a longsword through her boyfriend's heart, and slowly twisted it. "Takashi Maeda sends his regards~." ...

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?! I'm still recovering from George R.R. Martin... A girl with pink hair and drills stepped up to Hisao. She thrust a longsword through her boyfriend's heart, and slowly twisted it. "Takashi Maeda sends his regards~."

The last piece was pretty interesting, I must admit. It's funny to see that being mute doesn't stop Misha being herself

An interesting start. I wonder in which direction you will take this. Bad ends lead to nothing good in general, but you never know. Maybe it will lead Hisao and Rin to a better understanding of each other

Have you been reading my mind lately? I seem to be subconsciously reading/ manipulating the minds of other people quite frequently since making a forum account. IDK, maybe the forums emit Marvel-brand gamma radiation or some crap. I think I can see why you ship Miaski and Akio. They'll have beautif...

I could see the other teachers having a "who'll be the first to drop the Art Club" pool, however. I can get behind this. Mutou would definitely be in on it. Random headcanons for class 3-3: Takashi is not actually the biggest dick in the class. He is pretty bitter and has a quick temper, ...

The writing is superb, and you perfectly manage to make all the characters feel real, even the background characters and the OCs (even if I disagree with what Ritsu says about Hayashi. He may only talk about books, but he's still bestbackgroundcharacter :D). Ha! It's that cooler-than-thou vibe he g...

This is my first comment on this forum, and I wanted it to be on this thread. I've only recently discovered KS, and I enjoyed it immensely. Your fic is great, dewelar. It's the perfect following to Lilly's neutral end ( After the Dream is also pretty good in that sense though). The writing is superb...