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Really enjoyed this story. TBH I was skeptical at first if someone could create a character out of someone that doesn't even play a part in the story. I'm glad I was proven wrong, it was really well written. I loved the way you built up the character Suzu, I found she took a lot of elements from Rin...

Scene 2:The Rising Sun My eyes shoot open and I spring forward in my bed, sending my covers tumbling off me and towards the floor. My body was dripping with sweat, and shaking with fear. My heart thundered within my chest like an angry dog at its cage. Short rapid breathes, desperately trying to get...

Yamaku doesn't accept people with mental disabilities? Really, well I can kind of see why. As for physical disabilities, what is the maximum Yamaku could take like, Steven Hawking disability or the man who has no skin. Would they have all the proper equipment to deal with those types of disabilities.

Probably blind in one eye or Tinnitus. My left eye is far worse than my right so might as well poke it out. As for Tinnitus I'm sure i would get used to the noise .

Emi, I found her too be the cutest. I loved her running thing and how she wants to help keep Hisao in shape and avoid further heart attacks. It made me get the feels.

Really like it, good job. Interesting OC, keep on being awesome, I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

Just finished reading this, thought it was awesome, you did the character a lot of good, just by going off her appearance. Was scared at the ending, thankfully I didn't get the "bad" side. Well done! Keep on writing, I like your style.

Thank you both, I did some editing according to your feedback, I hope I didn't miss anything, thanks for your feedback! Fic character name same as forum username This smacks of author self-insert. Bad idea. Giving a character the same name as one's persona runs a risk of getting too attached to the ...

This is my first fan fiction for Katawa Shoujo, please leave some criticism so I can be a better writer, hope you enjoy. Will update when I can. Sorry for all the errors, went through it a few times, but I'm not the best at editing :/. Katawa Shoujo Yuto's Tale This is a fan-fiction of my Original C...

Wow, just wow. You had me on the edge of my seat,bed, pillow? Well whatever, I thought it was awesome. Loved the ending, thank you for writing this!

Nice story, really found it well done. . I love the idea with Shizune, Definitely one of my favorite stories on the forums so far!