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So in the beginning she was all excited about some really great scoop, and then she immediately forgot about it in favour of the sob story of some old guy nobody except Hisao and Lilly at her school know, and she's going to try to sell Naomi on printing it in the school newspaper ? :shock: Well the...

“I’m sorry. I forgot all about your scars.” All my feels. Great job! I was trying to have a lighthearted pick me up not induce feels :oops: What a righteous old dude! Fantastic little piece, Path! I thoroughly enjoyed it. :D Thanks! I like the antique shop guy. He reminds of an old man who goes to ...

Another one shot in response to the Monday Musings from the KS Subreddit. I also don't remember Hanako's speech pattern, so apologizes in advance if it sounds force along with SPaG issues. Also a little update on my Molly fanfic. I have the next scene planned out already and written the first part o...

Holy cow! I'd never considered this scenario before but it's fantastic! Apart from SPaG errors, it's an amazing story. I loved it! Thanks! Well, obviously the story needs a lot of work on the grammar side, but I also don't think Misha would be that open about what happened to anyone nor would Lilly...

Another one-shot done in response to the Monday Musings by OneManArmy77 on the subreddit . This was written about two months ago. Enjoy. Thanks. _____________________ Lilly's hands deftly maneuver the cup beneath the kettle's spout as she settles back into the tea room. A skilled observer might have...

Credit goes to /u/OneManArmy77 from the KS subreddit for doing prompt 2 in the Monday Musings. Was thinking of writing this one-shot for a while but the prompt made me to decide to write it. I was originally going for something more meta and Matrix parody but came up with this. I either might contin...

Making Wizard of Oz references is going to be a thing for Asuka isn't it? Well you're not that far from what I plan. More like references to American movies. She also quotes Stars Wars in this scene, but I guess it's more subtle than I thought. :lol: As for the story, the first part with Emi and Ri...

Rin doesn't really seem like Rin, it's hard to imagine her getting angry over Emi taking long, even if she remembered. I don't know how you got Rin being angry at Emi for taking long. I didn't imply it, but it seems like it, it wasn't intended. I feel bad ripping into somebodies work like this, I d...

This chapter is the longest I wrote so far, at about 4800 words. There also might be more SPaG problems, as I didn't ask my usual people to proofread. Instead editing myself, so apologies in advance. Feedback and criticism is always welcome. Thanks. Act 1, Scene 3: Strange Terrain The school’s festi...

I'm really liking the story so far. Love the characters, as they seem active when interacting. Also love how you made Yamaku more lively in sense the students act like students when finding out what other students are up to. Looking forward up what's going to happen next.

Luckily Hanako let me borrow once of her science books

I think it should be "one of her science books"

so I could read up on covalent bonding.

Is that a shout out?


I like this Alternate Universe because it might be the few times I can say that I like Lilly.

The only thing I would say, and its minor, is that I hope we get more explanation as to why Molly moved to Japan, medical reasons alone don’t quite hold up. Molly's family were already going to move before her accident. Let's just say losing her legs, influenced why they moved to Japan. :lol: I thi...

Much better than your first chapter. :D Thanks,I guess procrastination helped here, cause ideas popped in my head looking at this, especially on being more descriptive on certain parts. The only thing I would say, and its minor, is that I hope we get more explanation as to why Molly moved to Japan,...

Put a little bit of yourself in your writing. I'm still trying to do that, since I never written a story before and the essays were the things I written the most. I'm slowly getting into finding a style that I like. Did you post the wrong chapter or didn't anything interesting happen during lunch? ...

This took a while to write and fix it up, with school and all. Hopefully I fixed the problem of making Molly not sound too generic this time around, and give her a personality. Feedback and criticism are welcome. Thanks Act 1, Scene 2: Innervison Hisao meets a familiar face at the school’s garden. T...