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by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 16420

Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/9

Hanako never really struck me as a character that made a ton of sense. She has a lot of trouble with emotion in general, and her logic isn't always the most... sane. I mean, we're talking about a girl who let her best guy-friend have sex with her because she thought he'd treat her like an adult. Al...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jul 09, 2012 5:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 16420

Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/9

Suicide Note At this point I'm just wishing you go baller with that and do an actual grim ending rather than a rehash of a certain Latin-named and well written fanfiction. Actual Grim Ending All is lost and all manners of things shall be lost. Well done, word-weaver, well done. I salute your effort...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, complete) (sex)
Replies: 46
Views: 23885

Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, updated pt.2)

grandmother It was their aunt if I recall correctly. Though you can let it slide as an oversight from Hisao. But I can tell it’s not what Akira wants to hear about. She gives me another raised eyebrow, and points to the space between Hanako and myself, where the position of our arms makes it clear ...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jul 08, 2012 6:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 16420

Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/8

I'm a calm person, generally, but if I -Just came home from a 14-hours flight -Had a sleepless night -Worried sick about my closest friend for days -Got slapped and shoved away by said closest friend I'd kinda show a whole new facet of my personnality too. We've never seen Lilly confronted with that...
by Ascended Flutist
Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, complete) (sex)
Replies: 46
Views: 23885

Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end)

Part of why I wanted to write this story is because I kept thinking about how Hisao and Hanako's actual relationship would work out. Unlike in the other paths, Hanako and Hisao don't really become a couple until right at the end of her route, and I wanted to explore that. And just as they both grew...
by Ascended Flutist
Sat Jul 07, 2012 4:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 42734

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Ten 7/7/12)

Spotted a few mistakes in the begining. missing prepositions like 'of', that sort of thing. As for the fic proper... Ffffuck this was good! The power outage, the rain outside giving an impression of inviting shelter to the council room (although this is all meta, that's the impression I got), the te...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jul 06, 2012 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, complete) (sex)
Replies: 46
Views: 23885

Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end)

Teasing Hisao is perfectly okay for Akira, but doing so in Hanako's presence could send her in a three day panic locked in her room for all she knows... I feel this particular point is rendered moot by her bringing alcohol to Hanako's party and dragging her and Hisao to a jazz club. Bringing alcoho...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jul 06, 2012 11:33 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4987
Views: 3957564

Re: Ask!

How's your standing with your game's fans? Linky :] The KS fanbase... we are pretty awkward about it. The existence of a KS fan community in the first place is pretty incredible, not to say anything about how big it is. Anyway, a majority of 4LS doesn't really want to do the community interaction t...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, complete) (sex)
Replies: 46
Views: 23885

Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end)

Alright Alright Alright. It's also the first time I've tried writing something in the visual novel format, so... yeah. Visual Novel format draws a certain range of reactions in these boards, few of them being positive. HOWEVER, I don't have any problems with it. In fact, I think I can help with the ...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 05, 2012 2:31 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Oh man, this replay is gonna be rough....
Replies: 18
Views: 6599

Re: Oh man, this replay is gonna be rough....

I'm periodically going through specific scenes when I need inspiration/infos for specific stuff for my fics (praise the guy who included the 'library' function by the way. It's amazing. I love you :] ), and boy is it nostalgic indeed. Like rediscovering an old beloved book. Except, well, it has imag...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 67625

Annoonsment Tiem!

Oh, yeah, uh, about that Announcement Time : Lately I've been encountering two completely unrelated problems that slow down the pace of my writing. First, I'm preparing for oral examinations occuring in July (17-18-19, specifically, so as a side note, I'll be completely unreachable from the 16th to ...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 16420

Re: Salvage [Hanako]

" Lilly ... I'm sorry." She cocks her head. "This is my fault. I always treated her like a child, like someone who needed protecting. Like I was her knight in shining armor." "In a way, Hisao, you were." I'm sorry... what? Then what was Hanako's outburst about? "O...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 05, 2012 4:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 67625

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)

Hello good sir! First of all, thanks for the kind words! These always warm me heart summat fierce, so they do. The Characterization of Rin, well, it helps that I only do small snippets with her, I honestly don't know how I would fare with a sustained dialogue. Though there may or may not (take it li...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 04, 2012 5:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Turn to Stone
Replies: 19
Views: 9575

Re: Turn to Stone

This fanfiction is good and you should feel good!
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 04, 2012 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 11/18)
Replies: 86
Views: 32715

Re: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 7/4)

Bagheera wrote:I got the impression it was open-ended by design so that we could use it with any (good end) route.

So did I, and I think it's a good thing. I like it that way.