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by Lost In The Fire
Sun Jul 14, 2013 10:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How'd you find yourself here?
Replies: 914
Views: 293575

Re: How'd you find yourself here?

I have written a few articles for the SCP Foundation site.
While I was in their IRC I came across several people discussing the game for some reason.
One gave a link, and out of interest I followed it, downloaded the game and am now here for all to see.

Mmmmm'yep.
by Lost In The Fire
Thu Jun 20, 2013 12:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Replies: 19
Views: 9253

Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot

I liked it. A shame that it won't be continued. I am glad you enjoyed it. The reason I have this as a oneshot rather than a longer work is that I was able to get across everything I wanted to with this scene. I feel that if I actually developed it into a longer work it may just turn into a fix fic....
by Lost In The Fire
Wed Jun 12, 2013 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Replies: 19
Views: 9253

Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot

Simple, but good and interesting short piece. It was quite nice. I liked how you used the falling out with Kenji and Hisao's relationship with him as an analogy for his relationship with Hanako, and although i'm not too hot on the monologue/realization Hisao has after that ("Tomorrow, i'll try...
by Lost In The Fire
Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Replies: 19
Views: 9253

Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot

Its not a bad thing. If I did turn this into a longer piece I'd most likely have Hisao's reconciliation with Hanako take place in the background as he waits for her to leave her room again. In the mean time there is patching things up with Kenji, which would be interesting to write, though a challen...
by Lost In The Fire
Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Replies: 19
Views: 9253

Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot

Markus Ramikin wrote:I liked it. A shame that it won't be continued.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
The reason I have this as a oneshot rather than a longer work is that I was able to get across everything I wanted to with this scene. I feel that if I actually developed it into a longer work it may just turn into a fix fic.
by Lost In The Fire
Thu Jun 06, 2013 5:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Replies: 19
Views: 9253

Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot

I'd suspect he'd need to do more than just apologise to Kenji to patch up that falling-out. :wink: I imagine that Hisao will probably cross that bridge when he comes to it. I'm not saying it won't be a difficult feat though, considering said bridge has been burned. As for your suggestions, thank yo...
by Lost In The Fire
Thu Jun 06, 2013 4:30 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: POLL: First girl you went for
Replies: 416
Views: 131299

Re: POLL: First girl you went for

My first play through involved me just making whatever choices I thought looked best. I ended up getting Emi.

My first active attempt to go after a specific girl was Hanako though.
by Lost In The Fire
Wed Jun 05, 2013 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Replies: 19
Views: 9253

He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]

It appears I have had a bit of free time on my hands recently, and thus decided to work on another oneshot. As always feedback is appreciated. He Didn't Listen: Part 1 “Get out of my room, get out of my room, get out of my room…!” Her words echoed through my mind as I made my way back to my room. Ea...
by Lost In The Fire
Wed Jun 05, 2013 12:37 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which character did you get most attached to and why
Replies: 736
Views: 209063

Re: Which character did you get most attached to and why

KeiichiO wrote:
Lost In The Fire wrote:
Welp, that's quite a disturbing image you have there.
That's nothing.
Oh, I'm sure.
by Lost In The Fire
Wed Jun 05, 2013 12:32 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which character did you get most attached to and why
Replies: 736
Views: 209063

Re: Which character did you get most attached to and why

Umber wrote: Shicchan is always cute. Emi...

...Eh.
Welp, that's quite a disturbing image you have there.
by Lost In The Fire
Mon Jun 03, 2013 10:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 84101

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 6/3/13)

I thought that the chapter was well worth the wait. Well done.
by Lost In The Fire
Sat Jun 01, 2013 12:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Observations - Oneshot
Replies: 14
Views: 8941

Re: Observations - Oneshot

Thank you for the comments. I have edited the story to hopefully clarify that the narrator is in fact not Nurse.

I'm glad to see that this did not backfire, for truth be told it was my first time writing fan fiction.
by Lost In The Fire
Fri May 31, 2013 4:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22
Replies: 82
Views: 35363

Re: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22

I look forward to seeing what exactly you work out, though I imagine the internal conflicts Lilly and Hanako will go through will be very hard to read.

So far this has been one of my favorite fanfics, so I am very interested in reading the rest.
by Lost In The Fire
Fri May 31, 2013 4:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which character did you get most attached to and why
Replies: 736
Views: 209063

Re: Which character did you get most attached to and why

Hey, it's you. I liked your one-shot. Hanako for me. While playing through her arc I was reminded of how shy my girlfriend was back in high school, and how the two of us danced around an actual relationship for the longest time. I did the same in my first (and last, for now) relationship. There's t...
by Lost In The Fire
Fri May 31, 2013 4:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which character did you get most attached to and why
Replies: 736
Views: 209063

Re: Which character did you get most attached to and why

Hanako for me.

While playing through her arc I was reminded of how shy my girlfriend was back in high school, and how the two of us danced around an actual relationship for the longest time.