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- Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
- Replies: 19
- Views: 9253
Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
The first chapter was a new and interesting take on how Hisao gains some insight into the problem and left the rest to the imagination. That was good. I'm pretty certain that further chapters won't make the story as a whole any better. Very true. However, the second part here looks like there will ...
- Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
- Replies: 19
- Views: 9253
Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
The only (and I seriously mean ONLY) minor nitpick I have is this: For several awkward minuets neither of us spoke. Someone was playing classical music in the background? Wow, that does sound awkward indeed. XD God damn it. I thought I had fixed all of those. Thank you for pointing that out. I tend...
- Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
- Replies: 19
- Views: 9253
Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
Alright guys. Turns out that I lied. I apparently had a little more to say with this one shot than I originally thought and am going to include part two. A big thanks goes to BlackWaltz for his help editing this from my original draft. As always feedback is appreciated. He Didn’t Listen: Part Two Ha...
- Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 10 up 8/28
Have to say that I really liked your Akira.
Entertaining chapter to say the least.
Entertaining chapter to say the least.
- Tue Aug 27, 2013 5:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
- Replies: 58
- Views: 31090
Re: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 5]
Well Hisao, everyone knows you get one punch, and only one punch, to knock someone out with one hit. You have used yours. In all seriousness, I like this fic so far. I also agree with Mirage though. The last of this chapter had Hisao acting out of character. While he does lash out in the VN a bit, i...
- Sun Aug 25, 2013 3:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 9 up 8/24]
Once again a great chapter delware. Each time you have it Emi focused I get the feeling that you have switched to EmixHisao, and every time you focus on Hanako I get the feeling you switch to HankoxHisao, which in my opinion is fairly awesome and shows the thought you've put into keeping what ever s...
- Sun Aug 18, 2013 3:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 7 up 8/18]
This was probably the fastest I devoured one of your chapters. Like Mirage said, your portrayal of Hanako is great and I thought that her being the one to confront Hisao and getting him to open up really showed that while a lot of her improvement seen in Lilly's route was for the benefit of Lilly an...
- Sat Aug 17, 2013 6:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 6 up 8/16]
Heh.
I really liked how you worked the Emi is a pirate part of her route into this. That made my day.
Enjoyable chapter over all.
I really liked how you worked the Emi is a pirate part of her route into this. That made my day.
Enjoyable chapter over all.
- Thu Aug 15, 2013 6:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Observations - Oneshot
- Replies: 14
- Views: 8941
Re: Observations - Oneshot
Glad you enjoyed it.
I do aim to please and I am happy that this piece in particular was so well received.
I do aim to please and I am happy that this piece in particular was so well received.
- Mon Aug 12, 2013 9:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Updated 8/12]
Welp. My predictions just got shot down.
I couldn't help but imagine a "dun dun dun" plying in the background when Shizune mentioned she has plans.
I couldn't help but imagine a "dun dun dun" plying in the background when Shizune mentioned she has plans.
- Mon Aug 12, 2013 1:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 4 up 8/10]
Well now. It appears you are using Tanabata as a sort of equivalent to the festival in this Round two of what is beginning to remind me a bit of Act 1. Unless you are planning on having Emi, Hisao and Hanako go as a group I am going to assume that this is going to be a matter of who asks Hisao first...
- Thu Aug 08, 2013 6:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 3 up 8/8]
3. Lilly having feelings for Hisao and trying to relcaim him ... I was under the impression (I might e mistaken of course) that the author intends to stick to the events up to Lilly's Bad End (i.e. Lilly leaving for Scotland) and then continuing from there. So far there's been no divergence, only a...
- Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 3 up 8/8]
Me thinks that the developments that you are referring to in the story's title will involve: 1. Hanako possibly trying to get closer to Hisao since I believe you are portraying her that she still has feelings for him. 2. A possible involvement with Emi. 3. Lilly having feelings for Hisao and trying ...
- Wed Aug 07, 2013 5:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 727423
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 2. up 8/6]
I'm liking this so far.
I am curious though, most of the time Emi is brought into fics involving Lilly or Hanako she is supporting cast. I wonder if this what you intend, or if this is to become a Emi X Hisao fic.
Don't feel compelled to answer that, I am just voicing my curiosity.
I am curious though, most of the time Emi is brought into fics involving Lilly or Hanako she is supporting cast. I wonder if this what you intend, or if this is to become a Emi X Hisao fic.
Don't feel compelled to answer that, I am just voicing my curiosity.
- Fri Jul 26, 2013 12:31 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Which character did you get most attached to and why
- Replies: 736
- Views: 209065
Re: Which character did you get most attached to and why
Even more interesting, what if one of them didn't particularly care for Hisao?Xanatos wrote:And would they have separate routes...Sea wrote:O_o so would it be Katawa Shoujo(s)?Xanatos wrote:It'd have been interesting if KS had a conjoined twin in it...
I mean, its not like one of them could split when he's around.