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And quick response to both of you on one thing: The dream sequence was something I came up with spontaneously (like most of what I write), and wasn't intended to reveal anything super deep. That being said, I really, really dislike the whole "It wAs JuSt a drEaM!" (insert wavy hands) trope...

Got one more for you guys. It'll be at least a week for the next one, promise. Why do we even have to learn this stupid language!? As usual, English homework feels like beating my head against a wall. A wall that makes no sense. Every stupid rule this language has, it breaks whenever it feels like ...

Already reaping the benefits! I feel like I can write freely within this story now. Hope this one is enjoyable. Glancing around, I realize that even though I've been here before, I didn't really pay attention to Hitomi's room. It's not unlike my own. The layout is a bit different, but like me, Hito...

Okay so here's where I'm at: I started Rebound on a single idea: Hisao re-reading Iwanako's letter in the light of losing Lilly, and gaining a new perspective as a result. The 9 chapters that followed grew organically from there. Less than a week after I began posting my chapters for that story, th...

Okay so here's where I'm at: I started Rebound on a single idea: Hisao re-reading Iwanako's letter in the light of losing Lilly, and gaining a new perspective as a result. The 9 chapters that followed grew organically from there. Less than a week after I began posting my chapters for that story, th...

"Kapur, what is the third variable in this reaction? I haven't written it on the board yet." I had been prepared for Mutou to call on me, as he often does when facing this side of the classroom, but in this case it was Molly he apparently was targeting. She looks up from her textbook, but ...

Hacksorus wrote: ↑Sun Sep 13, 2020 1:42 am This was a short, humble story, and I'd say it did what it wanted to do well. Vividly described autumn nature, large boats, girls being gay. What's not to like?

I'm kinda partial to small to medium-sized boats, myself.

Hey, I haven't written anything creatively like this in a long while, so if this sucks don't be too harsh. It doesn't suck. Welcome to the forum! Glad to see more people starting new works on here. First of all, I like it so far. I enjoyed both the completed Rika fics on here, and I can't help but ...

Typos fixed, thanks! I laugh, realizing how appropriate the word is for the girl. Hell, she acts more like a mother to Hanako than a friend, from what I've seen. If only he knew... *Flashbacks to Developments and Sisterhood * This implies that you've read Sisterhood already... Which begs the questio...

Just realized I was in middle school when this was written... KS has been around a long time. A little too flowery for me, and I wasn't aware of the super-rich Lilly era, but there were elements that were cute enough to still make it an enjoyable read. Now I'm just left wondering what Delta posted...

This one was a bit faster, but a lot of fun to write. Enjoy! When we reach the point between the dorms that we normally part ways, Hitomi surprises me by continuing towards the male dorm, tugging my hand to keep me from stopping. I suppose it's still a couple hours until curfew, but I'm not sure wh...

Thanks! The awkwardness is partly intentional and partly just from me writing this kind of thing, but glad it sorta worked as intended. I definitely think events flow better after adding this, so all in all I'm glad I went back and did it. And thank you. I hope so too. Often I go into a scene with o...

Should "and are talking quietly between them," be "and are talking quietly between them selves ?" Great work, once again, Xeraeo! I had fun reading and analyzing this one. Looking forward for whatever's coming next! :D Actually not sure either way, so I just simplified it to: &q...

So as Hacksorus pointed out, it felt like something was missing in the buildup to Hisao and Nako sleeping together at the end of Chapter 4. As I said then, that was partly just my hesitation to actually write that part, so I sort of glossed over it, even though it had a lot of potential to build on...

Sorry for the delay there. I actually got a lot of work, finally, and have been busy these last few weeks. I'm trying to schedule my time better so I can still write regularly, even during busier times, but it's taking me a bit to adjust. Thanks for all the support and feedback so far! As usual, th...