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Okay, so, this is probably a good indicator that I need psychiatric observation, but this is what I've been doing with my free time lately: http://puu.sh/9mAdq/34e7c4bc49.jpg As you can see, my entire main cast is represented from left to right: Yoko, Amaya, Aiko, Tadao, and Naoko. Still working on ...

Having reread this whole story, and seeing what just how little ties there are the Katawa Shoujo beyong(sic) the setting, I'm inclined to think this would have been better off taking that one extra step and making it an entirely original story altogether. The story would not lose anything in doing ...

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Helbereth wrote:53,000 words? I ain't got time fer that!

hmmm, k
New date on the 2nd

If I'm being completely honest, I was attempting a bit of irony. Me, of all people, complaining about the length of a fan fiction is just plain ridiculous.

An extension is still a good idea, though.

53,000 words? I ain't got time fer that!

If I'm honest, I didn't re-read Closure particularly recently, though I have read it three times previously. I think the problem people encounter with such a story is that they're expecting Hisao, Misha, and the rest of the cast to act like they did in the source material, even though there's a fift...

Somewhere between them, really. She'd have Meridia's hair, but it's a little less wild, and I suppose she'd have a standard expression like the one Impatient suggested. Also, freckles. Don't forget the freckles. When I was getting a mental picture to describe for the page, I sort of added wavy red h...

First of all I would like to say that im enjoying the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter. If I may ask could you give a general idea when the next chapter will be out? I have read the story twice and I am still amazed how good it's written, although others might argue this. (seening...

The author took plenty of care in editing... I give my editor a great deal of credit in that regard. Helbereth is exceptionally adept at taking the semi-coherent pith I produce and molding it into decent writing. Remember back when you handed this one over for editing? The main villain was a clown ...

It's about strong female POV and male co-agonist taking on a monster. Wait, there's some connection to KS, let me go find it. Ah yes, the names of the individuals concerned… :D You kinda have to read Hisao and Kenji: Master Detectives to understand the established connection. Hoitash has created a ...

I'll be honest. I thought this chapter was below par for your writing and for KS smut in general. Unfortunately, I'm not entirely sure why. To me, it felt disjointed and rushed. Here are some assorted comments that I took down while reading. My eyes grow wide as I realize the implication of her aff...

Just read about Kenta and cant find any pictures about him Is his left arm and leg shrunken bad, or just crooked? You won't find images of Kenta, Yoko, Naoko, Tadao, or most of the non-canonical cast because, to my knowledge, none exist. There are a few images of Aiko and Amaya, all of which were c...

Thank you Also >she's full-figured and chesty, but toned from her frequent swimming, >full figured >but toned U wot m8 Toned in the sense that Scarlet Johansson or Megan Fox are toned. Strong and fit, but still decidedly feminine in shape. One of the major problems with describing her as such in th...

“W-well, you look great,” I say, attempting to smile. I swear this actually works. It's so ridiculous that it snaps girls out of their panic. Or something. Women have an entire lobe of their brain dedicated to the interpretation of compliments, which, when activated, can negate all other functions.

Honestly, where Aiko is concerned, I left her description somewhat ambiguous intentionally. Because the story reads through her eyes, it helps with immersion if the reader can fill in some of the details on their own. All I've really specified is that she's full-figured and chesty, but toned from he...