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Quite decent. I generally appreciate the experimental, and I think this tactic paid off here.

I'll admit, I wasn't sure it was a dream until the Hanako scene, which either tells you a lot about me or a lot about your writing! Lap's work has more sex than a hospital has death. You can smell it all over. I get tired of it easily myself, because it's not quite my thing, but I respect what it's...

I have read all of the above.

Chris wrote a functional fluff piece. Normie wrote a party piece with just a hint of a smutty atmosphere with ultimately no sex. Nothing too out of the norm.

These were fundamentally ill-conceived and shallow. I find that relatable.

what a sexy older man sakidaddy is

he is cruel beyond words,

and that turns me on

Welcome to the forums, as Nuke said. Good to see new people joining. For a first story on the Renai, you've got a great story here. Short and self-contained, and generally optimistic, despite the sadness within it. I personally disagree with Nuke's, (and subsequently your own) assessment of the fla...

Welcome to the forums! As someone who's quite new myself, this place is quite welcoming. You've got a good premise going. The unusual friendship of a Misha-Hanako relationship is a compelling dynamic to explore. However, the piece seems to be too short to use the flashback effectively. It could impr...

It's lovely that Saki misses Hisao. It's a Ying and Yang situation; a driver didn't miss him.

Index Rin Goes To Sea yes ma’am, when she shrugged armlessly under the strand-like clouds under the jellyfish sky yes ma’am, when she dived it was by the light of a moon which refused to be shot down. which refused to destroy her the way she wanted to be destroyed I did not see what she saw underne...

Adorable.

Silentcook wrote: ↑Thu Oct 31, 2019 6:52 pm

NuclearStudent wrote: ↑Thu Oct 31, 2019 5:44 pm We were in contact with each other, so perhaps something about our conversations triggered a mass insanity.

Y'all ain't getting away with pledging temporary.

I assert nothing about how temporary it might or might not be.

I have no idea what I have just read - I didn't finish reading - but it seems to fit in well with the "dream" theme of this batch's stories. Though in this case it's probably more drug-induced hallucinations... I'm not sure why all of us turned in dream-like entries. I know that I had an ...

brythain wrote: ↑Sun Oct 27, 2019 4:03 am "A policeman had appeared, and he began haraunging Misha and Yuuko for disrupting the piece yet again."

*haranguing
not sure if also *peace, but 'piece' works fine here.

But yes, this is classic Flann O'Brien territory.

oh bugger me with a rake ain't I done proofreading

'parently not

Index The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that...

Is that first paragraph something Hisao would write? Those could well be his internal thoughts, but I'm not sure it's like him to write so brutally in any timeline.