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Sharp-O wrote:

Emi-chan wrote:Rin is a Psycho Pass fan (because of the philosophy).

She probably also has a soft spot for the main theme too.

God I love that song.
And that anime.
Gahhhh.

Zykes wrote:I dunno if it's just shadowing or what not, but Lilly's bikini sure is transparent looking.

I dare say I see... nip. (my profile pic=mfw)

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Act 1 Scene 9: Where the News Happens Hisao goes on a romp about the festival with the Newspaper Club. _____________________________________________________________...

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Act 1 Scene 8: Empty Newsroom In the face of boredom, Hisao goes for a walk. _______________________________________________________________________________________...

neat

As the title reads, I made empty versions of each of the title cards in KS. Not really fan art, but I figured someone else might want these. I'm gonna try to eventually do these for my Naomi Route. Noticed that the acts each share the same "rip" pattern on all the vanilla acts. Oh, and if ...

There's a track meet during the festival? I am reading that correctly, right? A few hours before it kicks off, correct. Put it earlier so I could slot in certain events that happen throughout the day. Touch different than the VN, but it was a calculated change. Reasonings and such. I suggest not pr...

No longer lurking on this :). I like this story and will read each updated chapter when it comes out :). There were two spots in it where two words were missing a space. I would copy them but I'm on my mobile phone so it's a lot harder to. Found 'em. Had to nab a good few of those pre-post since I ...

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Act 1 Scene 7: Newsroom Engage (Again) Hisao does some more work in the Newspaper Club. ____________________________________________________________________________...

Mirage_GSM wrote:-snip-

Thanks again, m8
I might just have you look over stuff before I post it, if that's okay with you?

Also, for the epileptic scene, I talked to my college Psych professor for help on writing it properly, but I'll peek over that chapter anyhow.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Act 1 Scene 6, Part 2: Oil on the Press The final production begins on the Festival Issue of Yamaku's newspaper. ___________________________________________________...

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Act 1 Scene 6, Part 1: Oil on the Press The final production begins on the Festival Issue of Yamaku's newspaper. ___________________________________________________...

Mirage_GSM wrote:-snip-

I'll patch those up in a sec, editing has never been my favorite thing, but I'm making myself do it so I can get better at the damned stuff. A lot of it is just slip ups & continuity screw ups.

Thanks for hopping through and fixing stuff up for me.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Act 1 Scene 5: Newsroom Engage Hisao "joins up" with the Newspaper Club. Temporarily. Possibly permanently. He doesn't really know. ______________________...

Sharp-O wrote:Solid chapter, though you kind cut off mid-sentence at one point. "So... Go?" she laughs as she pops up and down on her and it just stops.

Shiet xD

I was trying to think of a way to describe a prosthetic, in a way other than human sized paper clips.