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by Chrono180
Mon Oct 15, 2012 7:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 12 up

I actually heard that before. Anyway, Oddball and I are fine tuning the next couple chapters. With a little luck I should have them up soon.
by Chrono180
Sun Oct 14, 2012 7:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 11 up

Sorry for the delay on this chapter everyone. I've been working my ass off finishing up my Madoka/X-men fanfic (which, if you want to read, is on fanfiction.net under my user ID Chrono180. Or search for Puella Magi illyana Magica). Anyway, its finally completed so with luck I'll finish uploading thi...
by Chrono180
Sat Oct 06, 2012 12:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 10 up

And here is chapter 11. Other chapters will follow shortly Chapter 11: Salvation The group reappeared in a massive... city, of a sort. It was a sea of buildings, shaped in unusual fashions not like anything seen on earth. Angels jutted out in ways that Hisao thought would have made the buildings col...
by Chrono180
Sat Sep 29, 2012 1:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 9 up

I'm going with Soverign. I like that one a lot. Also, good news. Oddball got the revisions of the latest chapter back to me, and his suggestions inspired me to throw a *major* twist into the mix regarding psylocke. I think its a brilliant addition, so here ya go. Chapter 10: Defection “You know, Men...
by Chrono180
Sat Sep 22, 2012 2:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 9 up

Sovereign, maybe? It's an adjective to describe something of royalty or having total control. The royalty thing fits with how important she could be if she's got cosmic-level power, while the control thing reflects her personality and her power. I also checked to make sure that this one isn't used....
by Chrono180
Fri Sep 21, 2012 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 9 up

Yeah, I don't really like Mollecke. Might rewrite the last chapter if I think of something different. Justice would be great, except theres already one in the Marvel U (two if you count the new universe one). Other ideas?
by Chrono180
Thu Sep 20, 2012 8:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 8 up

while I wait for oddball to come back with my feedback for chapter 10, here's chapter 9. If Oddballs' internet still isn't working in a couple weeks, I'll go ahead and post what I have for the remaining chapters, then go back and do revisions later. Also, do you have suggestions as to a codename for...
by Chrono180
Mon Sep 10, 2012 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 7 up

Well, here's chapter 8. I realized just yesterday that I accidently send chapter 10 to myself when I meant to send it to oddball, so there might be a brief gap in updating after the next chapter. But we'll see. Chapter eight: Desperation. “Nate Grey?” Misha asked, clearly puzzled. She turned to Shiz...
by Chrono180
Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 6 up

Here's chapter seven. Has anyone heard from Oddball lately? He seems to have vanished a couple weeks ago, and I'm not sure why. I hope he's alright. Chapter Seven: A Sinister Discovery “Kill them” As she lay in her bed with the covers over her and the door to her room lack, all Hanako could think of...
by Chrono180
Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 5 up

Here's chapter 6. I'm very proud of the fight scene in this chapter. And you can thank oddball for giving me the idea of the villian. I honestly wasn't sure who to have them face. Chapter six. Omega “So, where are we heading next?” Hisao asked as the team climbed into the blackbird. “Genosha.” Psylo...
by Chrono180
Thu Aug 23, 2012 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 5 up

“You don't look like they're usual creations.” Ouch! I like Hisao's scientific smart-assery (if that's a word). More of that please ;-) Don't worry, he spends most of this fic pointing out why things are impossible. I loved writing that part. And no deadpool in this fic, sorry. Might see if I can f...
by Chrono180
Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 4 up

Apoligizes for the late update. Just moved out of my house, started school, and started my crossdressing in public, so I've been busy, but very happy. Anyway, here's chapter five. Featuring an obscure but awesome location in the marvel universe and an obscure but creepy villain.: Chapter 5. Chaparan...
by Chrono180
Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 2 up

Well, yes, but I meant an "in character" reason as well. Cause she's not part of 75%? most simple but most boring as well. Cause she doesn't have a big reason to actively develop her power? Does she have to suffer something stressful or traumatic to fully activate her powers? If you want ...
by Chrono180
Fri Aug 10, 2012 4:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 2 up

Without giving too much of the next story away, there is a very good reason why Lilly hasn't unlocked her power yet. Cause it will break the story. Well not the problem on hand right now but then again i don't know how strong this molecular warping is. Anyway great story and can't wait for the next...
by Chrono180
Tue Aug 07, 2012 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 39514

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 2 up

Without giving too much of the next story away, there is a very good reason why Lilly hasn't unlocked her power yet. Anyway, chapter 3: Chapter 3. Search for a solution. As Hisao drove down 34th street he began mumbling angrily to himself. “This just HAD to happen, didn't it?” he fumed, “She had JUS...