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Zerebos wrote:I think InSaiyan might be interested in your Natsume. If I recall correctly he recently started a pseudo-route for Natsume and is looking for Natsume art.

Yeah I did it for his story.

G-Senjou no Maou
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Maji de Watashi ni Koi Shinasai (has a sequel too)
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these are much longer to finish but still good.

Natsume Ooe

Alright I read what you've done so far, and it's good but I agree with mirage. I won't go into grammar since I'm sure he's already covered it. Keep it up

InSaiyan wrote:You can call me InSayain.

You misspelled your name lol.

Also I'm too tired to read this now so I'll give my thoughts when I wake up.

British English, again. We spell words differently. put you on pack mule duty, Kapur is your problem These two are missing prepositions though. I did have other route writers look over things when I originally wrote them, it's just often that someone doesn't notice a preposition, or it could have b...

I posted this in my art thread but felt like adding it here too, it's when saki goes swimming with hisao after getting out of her wheelchair.

1-09: Drift There's always this strange cosiness to being in the school building after class hours. 'treat her as you would your glorious club president. Or I'll put you pack mule duty.' 'Then Miss Kapur your problem. I mean partner,' 'I just realised why we're here,' So strange to think how so muc...

Nice. Almost everything in this thread is amazing.

Sorry for the absence there, I've had a terrible flu. Still do, just well enough to actually make it to my desk today. Hope you get better. Don't feel pressure to have to update every day, 5 days is hardly an absence. Some stories go weeks or longer without updates, it's okay if you take more time ...

OC is fine but if you're gonna make him a martial arts master you can't stick to the original story and you definitely can't have the same disability. if you rewrite it as some supernatural fic it's different but no one wants to read katawa shoujo with a professional ninja protagonist, it just doesn...

Saki learning to fly

meow

Caught up to the story, finally. Good stuff so far, eager for the next part. It's a given that the nurse will end up giving Hisao condoms during the next appointment.

Your writing is good and I'm looking forward to reading more. 1-2: Control Sak 'Rika! You're up early!' Saki confirms my suspicions as she jogs up beside me outside the dorm. Rik 'I always try to be a diligent student, you know that.' Sak 'Uh-huh. You got ink on your cheek,' She comments as she lick...