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I feel quite bad bashing this type of writing. It's someone's first piece of writing. I think that's enough context and explanation for, well, all of it. That's sometimes why some people don't get any comments from me. :D And that is a problem, because people do need feedback to improve. If this pe...

I feel quite bad bashing this type of writing. It's someone's first piece of writing. I think that's enough context and explanation for, well, all of it.

This is a rewrite of Learning To Fly with a handful of minor changes, made with the approval of EurobeatJester. Strict effort has been made to adhere to the tones, themes, and structure of the original work and of the Katawa Shoujo universe as a whole. I owe a lot to this community and have a deep r...

Why does this exist? Nothing really happens here, and no particular mood is created.

Answer being that it's an author's first work and a warming-up of the engines. Author never came back, so presumably they're doing better work elsewhere.

MegaTank wrote: ↑Tue Jul 14, 2020 6:40 pm

NuclearStudent wrote: ↑Tue Jul 14, 2020 12:26 am you rise

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I'm sorry, what?

Sorry, that was meant as a "welcome to the forums."

Is this fic finished, or is there more? The ending is rather abrupt.

you rise

(I don't comment on that many of these, but Oddball needs company.) The author can be forgiven for their use of language because they aren't native English speakers. It has a number of spelling errors eg. "niversities" ought to be "universities," but the prose is not exceptionall...

I know I'm probably being quite annoying with all of my recent comments around here recently, given this forums age and declining viewership, however I think it's amazing this game is still drawing people like me into the universe of fanfic (which I had previously had no idea was so good). Forgetme...

the halogen pond is a lovely blue

I feel like prof is being unintentionally roasted

art is never abandoned, only-

I do love unreliable narration: even though Shizune's route is flawed, the use of unreliability is a notable strength. It's cool to see you carrying that forward, and I look forward to your progress. I've also learned a lot from pushing work here. It's a nice feeling, to improve.

Reading Objects In Space makes me wish I could have known and talked to Doomish. In terms of design, style, and intent it's very similar to a piece I recently did about Saki and Hisao being sad. I suspect that he also, as a writer of some over-the-top out-there stuff, wanted to pursue a more subdued...

Hello hello! I've vaguely seen your previous story, but I don't think we've ever talked before. Nice to meet you. On the subject of the story itself, I personally believe that chapter one was unnecessary and undesirable. This is a story; we don't need to be told everything through exposition. The se...

It was a hell of a crash transition moving from Raiman's Riri to yours. Raiman's Lilly was an elegant, formal, and long worded lady. As usual, yours was a passive aggressive teenager out to cuck or be cucked. It's standard Normie fare, with most of the usual beats. You're right in that it's a little...