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dewelar wrote:

...although frankly, I don't know why people found the wheatfield scene to be so special either. There are scenes from Hanako's, Emi's, Rin's, and even Shizune's that envoke a lot more emotion--but then again, that's just me

Rin. Dandelions. That is all.

Rin. Rain. That is all.

So I was just looking through this when I saw that Rooftops was one of the topics of discussion about two weeks ago. I'm not sure what the policy is on bringing an older topic back for one post, but I was otherwise occupied with family matters at the time, and would like to comment on it, now that i...

That ending was like something out of a cheesy sitcom. I love it. One small criticism though, when Saki is worried about Rika's heart, she calls her Rika-chan. Personally, I don't think honorifics work in English prose, with exceptions such as Misha's nickname quirk. The hikikomori thing too, it jus...

My family know. They actually helped a bit with my ideas for Blossom, back in the planning stage. They don't care that it's anime based, nor do I, they care that it has a message that somehow managed to get me writing more seriously. Everything before that point was a sub-3,000 word shitfest. Now I'...

Ah, you're back! Wonderful, now I can see how another person interprets Miki. Looks like a good chapter, nothing glaringly obvious that's wrong with it, which is good considering you just got back into writing after a period in a depressive state. As much as you've probably been told this by family,...

Stuff about eyes It's things like this that I sometimes get annoyed at. Whenever you don't have to wear the eyepatch, nobody knows or cares that you're disabled, or close to it, because it isn't visible. As people may have noticed from my sig, I suffer from congenital analgesia, one of the "in...

For some negative criticism, you've fallen into the same trap I do: It's unclear who is speaking in the dialogue. It works well in the first half, but when it's just Rin and Hisao it becomes confusing. If I may suggest, a light sprinkling of 'he' and 'I' would do well given it's just the two of the...

The closest thing to KS poetry I have is the full version of the poem in Blossom, the one Suzu wrote. I guess that's better than nothing though, so here it is . Keeping it in a pastebin because I've submitted it as part of an exam portfolio, which may still be in the marking process, so I want to av...

So a conversation in the Random KS Discussion thread gave me this idea. The idea to try writing something from Rin's perspective. Gotta say, not as difficult as one might first thing, but JEEZ it takes a while to think of the next thing to say. Anyway, this is the scene in the VN in which Rin collap...

All of those people are wrong. And really, "What's the point of something if nobody sees it?!" Fucking really ? This. I have at least six unpublished works that I keep to myself because they aren't something for others to see. Are they pointless? No, because I developed my ability by writ...

I remember I did something like this before I started posting here. You and I seem to have similar ideas of how Hanako's mind works, I'd like to see where this goes. Also, I'm not sure if it was intentional, but you made me chuckle a bit by using fire-related words as often as you did. Like the othe...

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Is... Is that based on the cafeteria scene in Blossom?

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