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- Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Talking Bird (Shizune semi-epilogue)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4162
Re: Talking Bird (Shizune semi-epilogue)
What a sweet and beautiful story :) Thank you very much, and thanks to everyone else who took the time to give their feedback. Posting on the official forums is intimidating, but it's worth it to give people the chance to reply to what they read. Watching hit counts on pastebin go up feels good, bu...
- Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blood Bank (aka "Feels for Jigoro") - Updated 4/5
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3743
Blood Bank (aka "Feels for Jigoro") - Updated 4/5
A while ago, a good man mentioned that he was intrigued by the small bit that Jigoro played in one of my other stories about something that is wet and cold. I won't be posting that story here for various reasons (although it is on pastebin), but I wanted to see if I could expand on that. Anyway. Thi...
- Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story
- Replies: 27
- Views: 32454
Re: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story
That was really moving, and I haven't even had time to read any of the other Saki stuff out there. I enjoyed the misleading way you approached the twist. The line that probably hit me the hardest was: She looks around the classroom. “I miss this. I miss school and I miss my friends. I want books bac...
- Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Talking Bird (Shizune semi-epilogue)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4162
Talking Bird (Shizune semi-epilogue)
Hi. Me again. This is the last of my already completed works that I'm going to post here for a while before posting something new. If you've already read this before on pastebin, then you could tell me what you thought about it if you want. Or you could do something else fun. Life is a box of chocol...
- Sat Mar 24, 2012 7:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Family Game Night (Shizune Good Ending After Story Fic)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 13552
Re: Family Game Night (Shizune Good Ending After Story Fic)
That was a great little read man, thank you for writing that. The little detail with the cat doll was an especially nice touch.
- Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
- Replies: 63
- Views: 26299
Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]
You've definitely improved since your first draft. I know you're leaving it ambiguous as to which route Hisao is on, but you might want to think about what time of the year your story takes place in, since some routes last longer than others and potentially getting Kenji and Yuuko back together befo...
- Tue Mar 20, 2012 4:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: You And I Both (Shizune)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4940
Re: You And I Both (Shizune)
Already said this on /vg/ before, but once more can't hurt - really like this story, more Shizune is always a good thing! :D Once more definitely can't hurt. Thank you very much, you can count on more Shizune from me. Great story but try to use prose form instead of a script form because its not a ...
- Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: You And I Both (Shizune)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4940
You And I Both (Shizune)
Hi. I don't really use forums and I don't really remember how. But I do want to become a better writer, and I was hoping maybe you could help me with that. And if you get some enjoyment out of these things I've made, then all's fair. I have a pastebin with some other writings in my signature, you ca...