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by BristerXD
Wed Sep 30, 2020 12:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 96
Views: 45779

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

You guys are in real trouble now... I'm writing this a slightly more reasonable time of night than before. And not only that, I've taken headache medicine. Call me the fucking Rasputin of this generation because I'm about to earn a lot of influence by being completely batshit. Here is how Chatty is ...
by BristerXD
Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 96
Views: 45779

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

I said I'm getting ahead of the chapters now and god damn it is my drive to avoid doing any more fucking spreadsheets for stats compelling me to stick to my promise. And plus these are too spicy to keep on the back burners of my mind. So, with no regards for my academic well being or the blood vesse...
by BristerXD
Mon Sep 28, 2020 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter Lantern - Rika Pseudo Route (Prev. known as Evolution Fuel)
Replies: 11
Views: 5652

Re: Evolution Fuel - Rika Pseudo Route

Alight, second verse hopefully better than the first. And I can say before getting in specifics that I agree with the others here and say that this chapter is a vast improvement on your first. Not to say the first one was like going on a bumper car with two broken knees and a concussion but it now c...
by BristerXD
Thu Sep 24, 2020 12:00 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Some Emergancy commission goodness
Replies: 4
Views: 5032

Some Emergancy commission goodness

Hey I commission this artist, shark.bite.art, to help her out and she did this cute Shizune and Misha piece. Go commission her, she did it for just 10 bucks!
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by BristerXD
Sun Sep 20, 2020 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 96
Views: 45779

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Alright, I kept saying I was waiting for another trio of chapters to come out so I could do what I did my last post and nows there's four with a fifth right around the corner if not already out meaning I should edit this post but instead I'll probably just do the patented Edit: because fuck you I'm ...
by BristerXD
Sat Sep 19, 2020 9:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter Lantern - Rika Pseudo Route (Prev. known as Evolution Fuel)
Replies: 11
Views: 5652

Re: Evolution Fuel - Rika Pseudo Route

Welcome to our cluuuub, welcome to our cluuub, welcome Squidward welcome squid ward welcome squid-Can you tell I'm starting the writing of this in a very sleep-deprived state? Ignore that, super excited to see yet another person step up to the fan fiction plate. Especially since it's born out of a p...
by BristerXD
Wed Aug 26, 2020 9:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: If I Do: A sappy, cathartic epilogue to the neutral ending of Rin's route.
Replies: 6
Views: 2963

Re: If I Do: A sappy, cathartic epilogue to the neutral ending of Rin's route.

All right, always good to see some new blood in the forum. I say that as if I'm a veteran and not just some two-year-long stalker who is currently in the process of posting his own work to the forum. Not minding that ramble, I was very happy to see that not only are you new here but you're a first-t...
by BristerXD
Sat Aug 15, 2020 10:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 96
Views: 45779

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Act 2 Scene 1: All-round completely solid. A thing I’m starting to notice in your writing style is that you really love long complex sentences. I hesitate to call them run-ons since you clearly have a stronger handle on grammatical rules than me but that’s not the issue I have. Some sentence variety...
by BristerXD
Tue Aug 04, 2020 1:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 96
Views: 45779

Re: To Miss the Mark: An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

This is such an intriguing piece! I really love how you're setting up Hitomi here, this more boorish and frank personality isn't one you see often in other OC girl pieces. She character in general seems to be very well rounded and has a lot of appeal in my eyes. At least enough to keep reading. Thou...
by BristerXD
Tue Mar 05, 2019 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 36629

Re: (WIP) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate (What happens if one misses fate?)

Hey man, glad to see more people getting inspired to write on this forum. Especially with such cool ideas like these which I haven’t seen before. This is a super interesting direction to take the characters since we really know ever little about them. Now I do have some points of criticism. In the b...
by BristerXD
Fri Feb 08, 2019 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)
Replies: 4
Views: 3437

Re: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)

Well even though this is later than my own birth was, I’d still say it was worth it. I honestly had no idea how this pairing would go as we don’t really see it often. But you made it feel way more natural than I expected and the story made me madly smile by the end of it. Hats off to ya.
by BristerXD
Sun Dec 30, 2018 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)
Replies: 6
Views: 4352

Re: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)

The idea of Kenji saying krunk makes me imagine him the Soulja Boy music video for crank that.
by BristerXD
Wed Dec 26, 2018 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 53
Views: 45439

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

Hi... you all have never seen me. This is actually my first ever post in this forum as I continue to plan and write a full length fan fic. And it's going to be a rushed holiday fluff piece based on another person's prompt. Done probably on Christmas after an all nighter and battling probably severe ...