Katawa Shoujo Forums

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑Sat Nov 03, 2018 9:15 am Hmm... At first I equated the "replenishment hive" with the Aura Mart, but that doesn't work out so well... The cafeteria? But that doesn't fit the "weekly"...

I had assumed it was pretty obvious that it was the girls' dormitories. Evidently not.

Cup & Saucer - A Cute Act 1 for a Pseudo-Pseudo Route (i.e., Hisao x Girl from Girl's perspective). It's serviceable for what it is. It gets Rika's condition pretty wrong, but still (mostly) matches the thematic basis of the Rika concept. By virtue of being an Act 1, though, the best it can be ...

I check my watch again. It’s mid-afternoon now. I’ve been waiting at the train station since a little before noon. The plan was to meet Misha and Shizune when they came back, but it seems they missed their train. And the one after that. Here’s hoping they caught the third. Speaking of which, that sh...

Haven't read it yet, but saw mention that it was initially posted to Pastebin. A lil' detective work later, and here you go: https://pastebin.com/u/Flopsy Two more chapters than were posted here.

An Evening Rendezvous This is one of those few times that lewd for the sake of lewd can run into context issues. This is post-Shizune bad end, but there's no real accounting for the fallout from that event. The girls casually mention Shizune, which would presumably be a sore spot, unless the relati...

Birth of a Fighter I like the idea of this fic, but not how it was executed. Setting aside the creative decisions and factual errors, which are both easily excusable, the issue is that the fic tried to do too much at once. Too many plot points and hooks crammed into the introduction - it short-circ...

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...

A nice little piece. I would've liked a bit more detail on Hisao - it reads as though he froze in place once Shizune and Misha walked in, whereas I would expect no end to the stuttering and blushing and general discomfort from him. Much as I enjoy playing up Hisao's impotence (I really do), I wante...

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...

Finally satisfied, I place my pen down and review the end result: Dear Iwanako, I’m sorry it took so long to write back. There are several excuses I could make as to why, but the most honest answer is that I simply wasn’t ready. Thank you for the news about our class - it’s good to hear how everyone...

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...

Honestly, I don't own the idea of Misha swimming - anyone else is free to use it. The important thing is that you don't rely on other works to justify plot points in yours. By pulling from other works, you risk missing the reasoning and supporting details for why a certain decision is made, but that...

Okay, well, this is about 5 years after I initially expressed my intention to read the fic, and even at that it was pushed up the queue for various reasons, but regardless, here we are. Given I spilled a lot of ink on the idea of feedback and how it should be given, time to put my money where my mou...

As someone who has been giving Downix feedback , reviews, and advice, I feel somewhat responsible for some of this, and as such, feel I should throw in my two cents. When I initially read the draft of this fic, I hadn't read MTtB - I had no reason to think it would be necessary, and little time to j...

AlexFDSR wrote: ↑Thu Sep 06, 2018 7:19 am

ProfAllister wrote: ↑Wed Sep 05, 2018 8:14 pm “Yeah, the, uh, YHoOS.”

The what?

https://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52& ... 93#p172693

Skip down to Hisao talking to Natsume.