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- Tue Oct 06, 2015 5:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 05/10/15)
As always, huge thanks to everyone for all the great comments! I’m really pleased to see so many people reading this and (hopefully) enjoying it, although the exact nature of said enjoyment might be a little different for this chapter. :twisted: And possibly the next couple. I neither confirm nor de...
- Mon Oct 05, 2015 5:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 26/09/15)
17. Out of the Labyrinth… “ You have reached your final destination, ” said the satnav, as a sudden deceleration tugged Shiina Mikado halfway out of her seat. The Mercedes swung to the side of the road and jerked to a halt. Shiina rocked back – Shizune drove in a manner that might politely be descr...
- Sun Sep 27, 2015 6:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 26/09/15)
As always, people, massive thanks for the comments. This chapter took a bit longer to write than I’d hoped – real life gets in the way sometimes – and I’m really glad you stuck around! Is it weird that I'm kinda hoping there are ghosts, even if they wouldn't fit the story at all? Not seriously, of c...
- Sat Sep 26, 2015 12:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 14/09/15)
16. Plus ça Change A mist came down, on the morning that Emi Takada left Tokyo for the last time. It formed just after midnight, fine and pale, brushing at the tops of the tallest skyscrapers, its grey fingers teasing through radio masts and cellphone antennae. During the early hours it became bold...
- Wed Sep 16, 2015 5:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 14/09/15)
Many thanks for all the kind comments and continued support! We’re moving towards the end game now, but still plenty of fun stuff to come. (Fun for us, that is. For the characters, maybe not so much… :twisted: ) I'm very glad Shiina is making the effort to reconnect with her friends. Although her na...
- Mon Sep 14, 2015 4:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 08/09/15)
15. Ghosts Naked, she stands at the edge. Her back is straight, her head high and arms spread wide. One foot reaches into the sharp night air. The slightest tilt forwards and gravity takes over, the slow arc, poised body pivoting around the other foot until that falls free as well and then the worl...
- Wed Sep 09, 2015 5:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 08/09/15)
Thanks very much, people! It’s always nice to be told that you give good Rin.
Meanwhile, in central Tokyo...
Meanwhile, in central Tokyo...
- Tue Sep 08, 2015 6:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 02/09/15)
14. Gregor Samsa’s Unsettling Dreams The gun went off with a hard, flat sound, like two slabs of wood clapped together. Emi launched herself off the blocks, surging away from the start line almost before the sound of the pistol reached her. It was pure reflex, nothing that required conscious though...
- Fri Sep 04, 2015 6:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 876702
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Update: Aug/Sep—Hanako)
Or chose the path of the Bene Gesserit.brythain wrote:Imagine the wonderful horrors that would await us if she chose Chani or Ghanima as her role-models instead...
“I h-hold at your neck the Gom Jabbar, Hisao.”
- Wed Sep 02, 2015 5:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 02/09/15)
I'm not crying! Shut up! Stupid Sadako, making me feel and shit... [Just as planned.] Something tells me it isn't truly over, and not because of the resting of an abrupt end. There has to be at least one more chapter! I'm sure of it! What, you mean that’s not how you finish a story off? Damn… :twis...
- Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:22 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 28/08/15)
13. The Nail that Sticks Up Emi Takada’s car was nestled in the Mori Tower parking garage, looking small and fake under the fluorescent lights; a boxy blue toy, like something from a capsule machine. Shiina Mikado stood next to it, wearing the widest smile she could manage, and watched Emi help Lil...
- Sat Aug 29, 2015 5:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 28/08/15)
I'm sorry, my responses are limited. You must ask the right questions.Hesmiyu wrote:That reminds me of Dr. Alfred Lanning
- Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 28/08/15)
Not a problem; I'm pretty sure you can get seeing-eye dogs for this these days. Now I have this picture in my head of Kenji in the back seat of the car and the dog is driving. “Master, don’t make me do this.” “Silence! Drive faster!” In all seriousness, this is riveting stuff and I'm enjoying it gr...
- Fri Aug 28, 2015 7:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures (Updated 28/08/15)
Also, my law-of-conservation-of-detail alarm is pinging; all of this almost certainly has to relate to Hisao's death... Well, given that we’re about two thirds of the way through the story, it’s probably safe to tell you that yes, you’re right, everything that has happened directly relates to Hisao...
- Fri Aug 28, 2015 5:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63172
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
12. Kill List Shizune had brought a tablet computer, a sleek silvery thing that spoke for her in a clear, surprisingly feminine voice. It probably cost a month’s rent on Emi’s flat, but it was plain Shizune didn’t like it much. She swiped and stabbed at its screen with obvious distaste. “Please exc...