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- Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 51605
Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 1-25-19)
Well, I feel bad about doing this, especially as this isn't complete yet, but I think this is distracting me to the point where it's keeping me from concentrating on my own writing, so time to get it off my chest. Reading this is painful. Not because it's bad - much the, opposite in fact. It's quite...
- Sat Jan 19, 2019 5:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A One-Shot: Footsteps in the Dark(9S/ Secret Santa '18)
- Replies: 27
- Views: 16783
Re: A One-Shot: Footsteps in the Dark(9S/ Secret Santa '18)
Well, this is a tricky one. It's well-written, there's no issue with the characters, and it's quite sweet. But at the same time, it hurts. Painfully so. I wouldn't see Lilly as necessarily doing this out of spite (unless it's Evil Lilly), but it certainly has the end result of twisting the knife for...
- Sat Jan 19, 2019 3:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Christmas Spirits, City Angels, A Shanghai Carol - S9 Submission for Scroff
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4042
Re: Christmas Spirits, City Angels, A Shanghai Carol - S9 Submission for Scroff
Lovely writing and a cute story. The subversion of expectations at the end is a nice touch (also a bit of an obvious cop-out, but the delivery was good, so we can let it slide).
Oddly enough, what I find most intriguing is the introduction of Mr. Domen. He could be an interesting figure to play with.
Oddly enough, what I find most intriguing is the introduction of Mr. Domen. He could be an interesting figure to play with.
- Sat Jan 19, 2019 12:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#73—'Stripping')
- Replies: 324
- Views: 306394
Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#55—'Clubbing') (S9)
A fic that only Brythain could write. Whenever I read one, I'm reminded that I need to eventually get around to reading *After the Dream* in its entirety.
As it is, it's Sci-Fi Christmas Katawas. What's not to like?
As it is, it's Sci-Fi Christmas Katawas. What's not to like?
- Sat Jan 19, 2019 10:51 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4359
Re: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)
Well, this is a good demonstration of the saying that dumb fun is the best kind of fun. And it's always fun to venture out of your comfort zone every once in a while. The character interactions are fun, with solid comedic timing. Well-done overall.
- Sat Jan 19, 2019 10:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
- Replies: 53
- Views: 45553
Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Onsen a Lifetime Nice story, but, umm... what's with all the Airplane! references? Rooftop Repartee Similar to Mirage, it's a nice story, but it's kinda sad to see (serious) depictions of Nomiya as the resident creep. Fun and goofy depictions are enjoyable for a laugh, but serious writing in that d...
- Thu Jan 10, 2019 6:17 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5342
Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
While I haven't watched that video, I figure I know exactly which one it is based on context. I've heard a few people chattering about this video. You can tell that the guy is interested in serious discussion and analysis by the fact that he deletes any comment that disagrees with him. ¬_¬ Unlike mo...
- Sat Jan 05, 2019 10:10 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
- Replies: 273
- Views: 94939
Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
Assuming it's a specialised pool, you're probably looking at something similar to what you'd find here . At the same time, it's a safe bet that there's a swim team and the occasional gym class pool days, emulating a normal high school, which would require regulation-sized swim lanes roped off, if no...
- Sat Dec 29, 2018 11:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
- Replies: 53
- Views: 45553
Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Okay, this one is posted on behalf of an old hand here - you can find some of his writings here . Writer: Vekter Victim: Feurox Prompt: A Silent Jive under Miseltoe and Snow - I’d like to see Hisao and an likely character enjoying each other’s company before leaving Yamaku for the holidays _________...
- Tue Dec 25, 2018 8:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 31st, 2023: Happy With Yourself)
- Replies: 150
- Views: 154202
Re: S9 Submission: Project Blue Curtain
Project Blue Curtain To say that I'm happy with the result would be a gross understatement. This was pretty phenomenal. Doesn't hurt that The Truman Show is one of my favorite movies. Can't help but point out there were some timeline issues (most notably that Hisao's lock-in scene with Emi comes on...
- Mon Dec 24, 2018 11:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2017 - Story collection
- Replies: 19
- Views: 68719
Re: Secret Santa 2017 - Story collection
A Christmas Sketch When I first came to Yamaku, I never would have guessed that I'd become an artist. No, I’m not an artist. Not really. But I’ve definitely found that I have a love for the craft. It seems like every moment of my free time I have my sketchbook in hand, forever capturing random, alm...
- Sun Dec 23, 2018 11:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
- Replies: 53
- Views: 45553
Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Victim: Hanako Fancopter Prompt: Hanako Misha hot springs Onsen a Lifetime “A-are you sure you can’t come, Mimi?” There is a small shuffling sound in the darkened room as Naomi turns toward me from under the heavy blanket. “I’m really not feeling up to it, Hana. Today’s a bad day. But you should go ...
- Sat Dec 22, 2018 5:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
- Replies: 53
- Views: 45553
Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Akira's Surprise Contrary to Mirage's implications, I did not pick and choose who drew what. And even if I had, I had yet to read any of Lap's work, so he was a complete question mark for me. (Full disclosure: I used a random number generator to pull an array of 27 numbers, 1-27. I rerolled once, b...
- Wed Dec 19, 2018 11:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 58011
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)
Just dumb fun corrupting the KS surnames into callsigns, then giving them some degree of overlapping traits. Part of the reason I sat on posting it is how barely KS it is. Not enough to stand on its own.
- Tue Dec 18, 2018 6:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 58011
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/31/18)
Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...