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Finally investigated why I hadn’t been getting any more WUs assigned. At first I thought that Stanford was down, like it had been before. Four days of nothing was a bit worrisome, though. But no, other people are obviously getting new WUs. Turns out they updated the FAHControl. Now I’m folding again...

I’m not sure how to tell you this but…

Ayane has the wrong eye covered.

I have to admit, that really threw me at first. Made me wonder if I had gotten it wrong after all. But then I started reading your latest chapter and knew there was a mistake.

The problem I’m having with this route and the other pseudo-route that has been started is that they’re both really enjoyable, but I can see myself having difficulty keeping track of what happened in which story. Was this the story where Hisao would have bad-ended by throwing Shizune and Misha out o...

danbuter wrote:Apparently the story is dry and boring. I'll save everyone the pain of reading it.

I didn’t get the chance to see for myself whether or not this was dry, but I’ll note that nobody said this was boring.

Found the error I mentioned to you:

We’ll show her what happens when you piss of Hisao Nakai.

Obviously, not in the place I thought it was.

in a world that was only just beginning to acknowledge such a type of relationship was acceptable. Unnecessarily wordy and you didn’t want a second ‘was’: ‘such a relationship as’ "Such a relationship as acceptable?" Yes. Though looking at it again, it’s not too bad with ‘was’. Either is ...

Leaty wrote:Edge of Spider-Verse #2

Interesting. Elseworlds for the Spider-Man/Marvel universe instead of DC.

I was never a big collector of DC comics, but I often picked up any Elseworlds comics I came across.

ogorhan wrote:Were in the home strecth definitly, now all thats left is will Emi let Hisao in and tell him how she feels.

Right. That’s all.

Given the author has stated that there are eight or so chapters left, we still have a bumpy ride to go.

In that case I would assume you are definitely male, even if the nickname was female ;-) Hey, not everyone who is an F-Ash/Emily shipper is male. :P Granted, a lot of the Misfiled Dreams beta-readers who have mentioned an opinion on the matter have expressed a certain level of, shall we say, flexib...

the surrounding people eyeing the two with various glances and looks eying in a world that was only just beginning to acknowledge such a type of relationship was acceptable. Unnecessarily wordy and you didn’t want a second ‘was’: ‘such a relationship as’ +++ New I forgot something. Forgot something...

AntonSlavik020 wrote:I generally assume someone is a guy unless they say otherwise, or their avatar is a girl, which is strange since I'm a guy with a female avatar.

But your forum name is decidedly male.

And what would your assumption be if the avatar is two girls?

Well, the grammar took a noticeable hit by not being looked over, but it’s up to your standard writing quality. There were a lot of your missing apostrophes & periods and I-me confusions. And, committing what seems to have become my biggest peeve about Japanese cultural mistakes, you had Hisao l...

Wait-a-minute, do I detect some plot lines actually getting resolved? Guess it’s a good-news, bad-news kind of day. And both of them are that the story is going to finish. :) A gang of Ns, maybe Hanako could change her name to match them. :D Hey, Veronica didn’t have to change her name when she join...

TheTealeaf wrote:Indeed it is, although I snuck two Evangelion references in there as well. One very blatant and the other a bit more sneaky.

The blatant one is the uncle. What’s the subtle one?

I have yet to get around to watching it, but I’m sure that the anime mentioned is Puella Magi Madoka Magica.