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by Zykes
Wed Apr 16, 2014 2:42 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases
Replies: 16
Views: 8370

Re: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases

I think that in terms of just writing (for yourself) that either method is fine and really depends on personal taste, but when talking about releasing it for public viewing, its a bit different. With a whole release, it's like one big swing, you hit it or miss it. Where with episodic release, you ha...
by Zykes
Wed Apr 16, 2014 2:31 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: How to write the characters
Replies: 17
Views: 8432

Re: How to write the characters

Just a couple of small points: 2) If you have a clear theme song for a character, playing it repeatedly while writing may help you get into the spirit of things. In my case, I feel this is quite true, though I think this method really boils down to how one's "Creative juices" actually work.
by Zykes
Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S6 Update - 2/28/14)

Hey, just a quick update. I am back to work on the next chapter. (Due to preparing to move to another state in a few weeks, I've been super busy. But now that most of it is taken care of, I can put some attention back to it. ) I'd say maybe some point next week to look for it to appear. Thanks for w...
by Zykes
Sat Mar 01, 2014 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S6 Update - 2/28/14)

Not really much to ay about this chapter except that 1.000 Yen seems way too expensive for two tries at a crane game (that's more than 10USD) and that you should try to use paragraphs instead of starting a new line after every sentence... I fixed that, I had original put 1,000 and when I looked up ...
by Zykes
Fri Feb 28, 2014 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S6 Update - 2/28/14)

Scene 6 – Personal Planning The morning sun begins to slip through the window, as it quickly reaches my face. A great surprise dawns on me as I open my eyes. I'm fully awake and filled with energy despite not having had my medication yet. Why do I feel this good today? I give a quick stretch before...
by Zykes
Sat Jan 25, 2014 1:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S5 Update - 1/23/14)

First, wait until the scene is written, then name it. Don't try to write to a title. I'm no longer naming my chapters, choosing to use that space to state whose POV it is instead, but when I was naming chapters I had a pretty simple way of doing it. Just about every scene reminded me of a song, and...
by Zykes
Thu Jan 23, 2014 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S5 Update - 1/23/14)

Overall, the story has improved markedly since chapter one, though. I'd like to hope so. I have found that life has been a great kick in the face and has slowed my pace in terms of actually getting this written, but the silver lining is that my writing has been positively affected. Hopefully I can ...
by Zykes
Thu Jan 23, 2014 5:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S5 Update - 1/23/14)

Scene 5 – Course Correction Ding...ding…ding…ding… The end of class came just as quickly as it began, as I realize I’m distracted. The math equation on the board seems more like another language at this point. A long, loud yawn comes out of me, which could make almost anyone feel just as tired. I g...
by Zykes
Fri Dec 06, 2013 2:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S4 Update - 10/14/13)

Just a bit here, Sorry I haven't gotten things up like I said I would, but my Final Projects have been kicking my butt (a few 10+ page ones to be exact)

Once they are out of the way, I will get back on this :O
by Zykes
Tue Oct 15, 2013 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S4 Update - 10/14/13)

A few homophone problems: I finish up the muffin now, as I savior the feeling of enjoyment. I think you meant "savour" . I guess I won't eat that than. then He's star t ing really hard at his watch. I'll be honest and say that 1 and 3 was just misspelling on my end and not noticing. Then/...
by Zykes
Mon Oct 14, 2013 12:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S4 Update - 10/14/13)

Scene 4 – Soothing Sentiment Tap Tap Tap… Huh, what is that? Tap Tap Tap Tap Tap… Why is this sound so loud and annoying! TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP……… BANG! Suddenly my eyes shoot wide open as I stare around the room. All I see is the class staring at me as Mutou looks down at me. His book was on top of ...
by Zykes
Fri Sep 27, 2013 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Staggering Harmony - (A2,S3 Update - 9/27/13)

Scene 3 – Brothers in Arms…? My head is becoming very familiar with the top of the desk, as I wait for the last few minutes of class to pass. It doesn’t help at all, trying to imagine a clock moving quickly. If anything it only makes everything take longer. I let out a short breath, feeling as if I...
by Zykes
Mon Sep 23, 2013 2:49 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Staggering Harmony - Extras (3/10/15) Beta Needed!
Replies: 18
Views: 17034

Re: Staggering Harmony - OCs, Art, and Q&A (Updated 1/28/13)

Image

I figured I might as well start to figure out how to design my own characters

So this at my, unskilled methods, is Hiroshi's look, from what I have envisioned.
by Zykes
Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S2 Update - 7/9/13)

Just a quick update on my end

About 2 weeks ago or so, I broke my hand, so that has stopped my writing for now

that is all.
by Zykes
Tue Jul 09, 2013 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 47355

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S2 Update - 7/9/2013)

Finally back into the flow of things, it seems like it has been forever since I've gotten a part of this story up here, a few months I think. Hopefully I can bring you more of this story a bit more often as my life is starting to "stabilize" now. Hope you enjoy this! _____________________...