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by Ascended Flutist
Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 67850

Something Old, Something New

Hello, reader. Today, you and I, we're having a dream. And then other things, but first, we're having a dream. TABLE OF CONTENT _____________________ 1 - Soft Passage 2 - Present Pieces 3 - Free to Soar 4 - Something Old, Something New _____________________ Go to Next Post | See Changelog http://ima...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:22 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4531640

Re: Ask!

Consider that sex in KS had the intention of serving the plot, not the other way around...At least in the later stages of story development. Moreover, despite the obvious hints of Hisao being The Master of Romance, most of the scenes are still the first intimate moments of at two virgins. People alr...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jun 22, 2012 12:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 67850

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)

I already have an idea that implements an actual, meaningful song, and I don't really want people stealing my thunder. I'll keep that in mind, but I don't really see how it matters. Different executions of the same idea aren't necessarily a bad thing, If I thought that this thread wouldn't exist. Y...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jun 22, 2012 11:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 67850

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)

Oh my, making the two sing together? I hadn't thought of that. To be honest I just thought to make a well-done youtube link to an appropriate song, but doing lyrics would work too. (that's a lot of to in one sentence) I gotta find some appropriate lyrics now, eh? Something that wouldn't get a [PAREN...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 67850

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)

A Hanako fan-fic with feels and well done smut? Are you a Hanabro or a Hanagod? Being a God would be very detrimental to my social life, so when the option came up I declined. I do regret it sometimes, but you know...I got by. Anyway, is this praise? I think this is praise. I like praise. :] In all...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jun 19, 2012 1:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dinner & Movie (Suzu)
Replies: 8
Views: 4117

Re: Dinner & Movie (Suzu)

This is sweet and, well, you know my stance on sweetness. :3 Other than that, I agree with Scissorlips on the sex scene. Found the transition is a bit abrupt from the kiss (or maybe it's not and I'm a virgin, herpderp), but the scene itself is actually pretty good. It's more of the fact that I'm afr...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 419382

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)

So I decided to give that story a shot. Alternate perspective, Iwanako, might be cool. The perspective is alternate alright. Good job making it feel drastically different from the VN. I like how meaningful you made the shopping and hairstyle scenes. Could have been a 'she's a gurl who does gurly stu...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story
Replies: 8
Views: 4078

Re: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story

Intricate writing is something I do. Oh okay. Though that in itself might be revealing a bit too much. :3 You will notice that I haven't used the word vampire once in the story so far. Fair enough. Well played. -If I wanted to write an Amnesia like story it would be a completely different story. I ...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 18, 2012 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
Replies: 7
Views: 4116

Re: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)

I like it, short and simple and (pun intended) SWEET Thank you sir, I am quite pleased you liked it. :] With any luck, I'll be able to buy a crate of cherries on the cheap tomorrow... hmmm... cherries. :) I can find no flaws in that shrewd reasonning of yours. If nothing else, the author's notes at...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 18, 2012 11:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story
Replies: 8
Views: 4078

Re: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story

Oh, a horror story. This is new...fairly. I like horror, kind of. Let's read this. "No man knows till he experiences it, what it is like to feel his own life-blood drawn away into the woman he loves." Bram Stoker, Dracula Well, that's a nice start. Vampires. Why not. I prefer Chtulhu mytho...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 720492

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/18)

You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You must construct additional Altars to Scissorlips.
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
Replies: 7
Views: 4116

Re: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)

High on cherries. Oh, and I found only one typo in there.

Edit : found more. derp, maybe I am high.
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
Replies: 7
Views: 4116

Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)

There are ripe cherries in my garden, so juicy and sweet they explode in your mouth in a savory concerto for taste buds. :3 This isn't in And to Live In Peace because fuck you, that's why it's doesn't really connect with anything else in the series, even though it fits in the timeline. Today was a ...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Four Words (Hanako)
Replies: 16
Views: 6170

Re: Carpe Diem (Hanako, Lilly Route Spoilers, Short One Sho

The fact that I couldn't stop thinking about that when Hisao discovers Lilly's Healthy Adolescent Sex Drive aside, I feel this was a worthwhile idea. Now, compact formatting like what you did can be a cool tool to express racing thoughts or other fast-paced and continuous events, but I couldn't imag...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Jun 17, 2012 4:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ride [Miki]
Replies: 11
Views: 5012

Re: Ride [Miki]

I liked it through and through. No gripes with the concision or how it begun/ended. In my opinion that's just you being overly harsh on your own work, but that's a good thing. Don't change that.