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- Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
- Replies: 123
- Views: 67850
Something Old, Something New
Hello, reader. Today, you and I, we're having a dream. And then other things, but first, we're having a dream. TABLE OF CONTENT _____________________ 1 - Soft Passage 2 - Present Pieces 3 - Free to Soar 4 - Something Old, Something New _____________________ Go to Next Post | See Changelog http://ima...
- Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:22 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4989
- Views: 4531640
Re: Ask!
Consider that sex in KS had the intention of serving the plot, not the other way around...At least in the later stages of story development. Moreover, despite the obvious hints of Hisao being The Master of Romance, most of the scenes are still the first intimate moments of at two virgins. People alr...
- Fri Jun 22, 2012 12:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
- Replies: 123
- Views: 67850
Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)
I already have an idea that implements an actual, meaningful song, and I don't really want people stealing my thunder. I'll keep that in mind, but I don't really see how it matters. Different executions of the same idea aren't necessarily a bad thing, If I thought that this thread wouldn't exist. Y...
- Fri Jun 22, 2012 11:51 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
- Replies: 123
- Views: 67850
Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)
Oh my, making the two sing together? I hadn't thought of that. To be honest I just thought to make a well-done youtube link to an appropriate song, but doing lyrics would work too. (that's a lot of to in one sentence) I gotta find some appropriate lyrics now, eh? Something that wouldn't get a [PAREN...
- Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
- Replies: 123
- Views: 67850
Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch3 up)
A Hanako fan-fic with feels and well done smut? Are you a Hanabro or a Hanagod? Being a God would be very detrimental to my social life, so when the option came up I declined. I do regret it sometimes, but you know...I got by. Anyway, is this praise? I think this is praise. I like praise. :] In all...
- Tue Jun 19, 2012 1:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dinner & Movie (Suzu)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4117
Re: Dinner & Movie (Suzu)
This is sweet and, well, you know my stance on sweetness. :3 Other than that, I agree with Scissorlips on the sex scene. Found the transition is a bit abrupt from the kiss (or maybe it's not and I'm a virgin, herpderp), but the scene itself is actually pretty good. It's more of the fact that I'm afr...
- Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 419382
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)
So I decided to give that story a shot. Alternate perspective, Iwanako, might be cool. The perspective is alternate alright. Good job making it feel drastically different from the VN. I like how meaningful you made the shopping and hairstyle scenes. Could have been a 'she's a gurl who does gurly stu...
- Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4078
Re: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story
Intricate writing is something I do. Oh okay. Though that in itself might be revealing a bit too much. :3 You will notice that I haven't used the word vampire once in the story so far. Fair enough. Well played. -If I wanted to write an Amnesia like story it would be a completely different story. I ...
- Mon Jun 18, 2012 3:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4116
Re: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
I like it, short and simple and (pun intended) SWEET Thank you sir, I am quite pleased you liked it. :] With any luck, I'll be able to buy a crate of cherries on the cheap tomorrow... hmmm... cherries. :) I can find no flaws in that shrewd reasonning of yours. If nothing else, the author's notes at...
- Mon Jun 18, 2012 11:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4078
Re: Dark Love Eternal - A Horror Story
Oh, a horror story. This is new...fairly. I like horror, kind of. Let's read this. "No man knows till he experiences it, what it is like to feel his own life-blood drawn away into the woman he loves." Bram Stoker, Dracula Well, that's a nice start. Vampires. Why not. I prefer Chtulhu mytho...
- Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 720492
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/18)
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You must construct additional Altars to Scissorlips.
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You have not enough praises.
You must construct additional Altars to Scissorlips.
- Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4116
Re: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
High on cherries. Oh, and I found only one typo in there.
Edit : found more. derp, maybe I am high.
Edit : found more. derp, maybe I am high.
- Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4116
Ladder to Heavens (Hanako one sho(r)t)
There are ripe cherries in my garden, so juicy and sweet they explode in your mouth in a savory concerto for taste buds. :3 This isn't in And to Live In Peace because fuck you, that's why it's doesn't really connect with anything else in the series, even though it fits in the timeline. Today was a ...
- Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Four Words (Hanako)
- Replies: 16
- Views: 6170
Re: Carpe Diem (Hanako, Lilly Route Spoilers, Short One Sho
The fact that I couldn't stop thinking about that when Hisao discovers Lilly's Healthy Adolescent Sex Drive aside, I feel this was a worthwhile idea. Now, compact formatting like what you did can be a cool tool to express racing thoughts or other fast-paced and continuous events, but I couldn't imag...
- Sun Jun 17, 2012 4:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ride [Miki]
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5012
Re: Ride [Miki]
I liked it through and through. No gripes with the concision or how it begun/ended. In my opinion that's just you being overly harsh on your own work, but that's a good thing. Don't change that.