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Munchenhausen wrote:

bhtooefr wrote:And it's canonically Lilly's mother that's Scottish...

I can dream, Harold :'(

Nuu, you can't. You're a got damned chair, laddy!

bhtooefr wrote:Nope, this isn't Oedipal at all.

Could have totally gone without that line for the rest of my life.
Just a few days ago, I was trying to remember the phrase for that and was actually glad that I couldn't remember. Damn.

A few minor typos, which I can list if you'd like. I liked it. Seems to be more of a gradual diversion than anything else, which isn't inherently bad but does make the narrative more predictable as the same settings are used and dialogue only altered slightly in most areas. I have a bit of trouble w...

dude defcon 1 do it I lol'd. Hard. I knew it could only get better from there. Screams are drowned out as the combined sounds of a kilogram of Potassium Chloride and three weeks of illegal internet research all come together. Umm, do you mean Potassium Chlorate ? KCl isn't volitile, but boy KClO 3 ...

While the final scene was indeed supremely cool, I can't help but feel that Miki should be very much a dead person after her encounter with the tank. Even assuming that the nano-armor can effectively dissipate the vast majority of such an impact, the kinetic energy of a tank round is too immense to...

TyronePotato wrote:Do you people not understand that hair color can naturally change over long periods of time?

Past adulthood, it's not likely to get any darker, especially not brown to black. Just my $0.02.

Ah yes, I forgot to add my other comments. I agree with what Helbereth said for the most part, but I disagree with his first statement of how there is no way that Lilly would just sever ties with Hanako and leave it as is. As we know nothing about what Hanako does after she kicks Hisao out, how do w...

I'm not sure how old you are, but 30 years is a really long time to not have any contact at all. If their feelings are still so strong after all this time it makes it all the more unbelievable that none of them tried to apologize earlier. I see Hisao as he opens the door and studies my face. I'm sh...

Yeah, I found one kicking around.The Fireman by MEHKANIK.

brythain wrote:It ain't over yet…

Whoops... I thought your chapter 6 post said that that was the end.

It's too bad... Didn't take ol' Shizune for a murderer

Neat story, but seriously: What the hell happened to Emi & Rin? I don't think that the resolution was very clear.

Bittersweet. I would not expect Shizune to be at all passive when she wanted Hisao that badly, but oh well. We never quite knew how Shizune dealt with her inability to seize him for herself, so I suppose the extrapolation is alright. I enjoyed it! :D Unrelated, but do you do any coding, perchance? I...

Marty Stu lies within.

It's finally time! The first meeting is now in session. Excellent! The posters before me have all made wonderful points, and Helbereth hit the nail on the head with his comment on Emi's characterization. I flinched mentally, audibly, physically, visually, and olfactorily when I read her asking if H...

Helbereth wrote:"With Apologies..." is about 90% responsible for my ever having started writing fan fiction. You could say that without that story being here, I would never have started writing Tomorrow's Doom.

... Definitely not what I expected to read from you. Point stands. Read at your own risk.