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- Thu Aug 27, 2015 5:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
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Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
You need longer chapters. I keep going 'how nice, how well-written, how in-character... how short. :( '. That’s due entirely to me panicking. I’ve got my story plan, and I think: “Okay, so in this chapter they need to be here , and I need to seed this piece of information, and put in this bit of fo...
- Wed Aug 26, 2015 4:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
11. Uncertainty Principle From the outside Accelerando looked small, almost unassuming; a narrow frontage of white marble and tinted glass just off Keyakizaka Street. Even its signage was low-key, looping English characters embossed into plain slate. If Rin hadn’t spotted it Emi would probably have...
- Wed Aug 26, 2015 4:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Wine (Chapter 2 - 26/8/15)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 10133
Re: Wine (Chapter 2)
That was great fun, thank you! We saw Hanako tipsy in KS, but to see her staggering about, absolutely haystacked is a special kind of wonderful.
I too think this will not end well. And I can’t wait.
I too think this will not end well. And I can’t wait.
- Sun Aug 23, 2015 11:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
Nice work, Sadako. Is that program like Poser? Kind of. It’s basically a program for making manga-style comics – you make your own characters, pose them, put them into comic frames, add backgrounds, speech bubbles, even effects like speed lines or those big sweat drops that appear on anime characte...
- Sat Aug 22, 2015 4:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
Apropos of nothing, it turns out you can make a half-decent Fractures!Shizune in Comipo…
- Sat Aug 22, 2015 3:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
I am so glad I was curious enough to read this because this is wonderful. I will be eagerly waiting for the next update. That’s very kind of you to say, thank you! Very happy to have you along for the ride. :D Perhaps it's because your avatar is a picture of the girl from Ringu which freaks me out ...
- Sat Aug 22, 2015 3:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
While it's depressing to see Misha and Shizune grow apart like that, at least it seems like there's hope for them becoming friends again. Assuming nothing happens to Misha first(or she turns out to be the killer or something :) ) The story of Shizune and Misha’s estrangement is, for me, the saddest...
- Sat Aug 22, 2015 3:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
Misha's the killer, Misha's next, or she's tooling up for a manhunt . Only one of these scenarios would be not-okay. :lol: My mind sometimes goes in directions that would make Rin tilt her head ever so slightly. Case in point: I now have Matrix Misha in my head. “We’re gonna need guns, Shicchan. Lo...
- Fri Aug 21, 2015 5:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
10. Still Small Voice Over the next few minutes Lilly typed the whole story to Shizune; from receiving the death threats, to the attacks on Emi and Rin, to the origin of the photographs. At her end of the line, Shizune sat and took copious notes, writing on the legal pad with her right hand and occ...
- Fri Aug 21, 2015 5:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
Wow. Thank you so much for the kind words, people. It really means a lot that you’re enjoying this. And I’m extremely pleased that my take on the characters is going down well – after all, the originals inspire so much genuine love and affection. I’d hate to get them wrong! (Silly point – my desktop...
- Thu Aug 20, 2015 5:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
9. Risk Management A quick check on Emi’s phone revealed three internet cafés within walking distance, although Rin vetoed one immediately. “Not KomiKoffee. I went there once and now I’m not allowed to back.” “You got banned from an internet café?” Emi tugged her hair out from under her scarf, smoo...
- Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
Awww shit, we're getting the band back together! :D Chapter 9 is called Risk Management . All I'm saying. :twisted: I'm glad to see they're at least trying to sort out their issues with each other. And the stuff about why Rin didn't like the officer was really fun. Part of the reason her perspectiv...
- Thu Aug 13, 2015 6:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
8. Two Divided by Zero There were many things Rin Tezuka did not like about Assistant Police Inspector Namba. She didn’t like the way he wore his tie, for example; there was something eerie about the way it was simultaneously loose and lopsided and yet pulled very tight around his collar. It made h...
- Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Butterflies and Ice Cream
- Replies: 28
- Views: 17753
Re: Butterflies and Ice Cream
This is a very nice piece of work. I love how everyone has their own take on Rin, all a little bit different. I seriously think you’ve done her justice – she seems to have lost just a little of her… What’s the best term for the quality of being quintessentially Rin? Rin-ness? Rinosity? Rinnitude! Sh...
- Wed Aug 12, 2015 5:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
- Replies: 148
- Views: 63207
Re: Fanfiction: Fractures
7. Talking in the Dark Emi could hear Lilly’s voice as she made her way down the stairs, quiet sentences and interjections broken by long silences. One half of a phone conversation. Her voice was coming from the Tezukas’ kitchen. Emi opened the door and saw Lilly walking slowly alongside the counte...