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by Sadako
Thu Aug 27, 2015 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

You need longer chapters. I keep going 'how nice, how well-written, how in-character... how short. :( '. That’s due entirely to me panicking. I’ve got my story plan, and I think: “Okay, so in this chapter they need to be here , and I need to seed this piece of information, and put in this bit of fo...
by Sadako
Wed Aug 26, 2015 4:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

11. Uncertainty Principle From the outside Accelerando looked small, almost unassuming; a narrow frontage of white marble and tinted glass just off Keyakizaka Street. Even its signage was low-key, looping English characters embossed into plain slate. If Rin hadn’t spotted it Emi would probably have...
by Sadako
Wed Aug 26, 2015 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Wine (Chapter 2 - 26/8/15)
Replies: 19
Views: 10133

Re: Wine (Chapter 2)

That was great fun, thank you! We saw Hanako tipsy in KS, but to see her staggering about, absolutely haystacked is a special kind of wonderful.

I too think this will not end well. And I can’t wait. :D
by Sadako
Sun Aug 23, 2015 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Nice work, Sadako. Is that program like Poser? Kind of. It’s basically a program for making manga-style comics – you make your own characters, pose them, put them into comic frames, add backgrounds, speech bubbles, even effects like speed lines or those big sweat drops that appear on anime characte...
by Sadako
Sat Aug 22, 2015 4:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Apropos of nothing, it turns out you can make a half-decent Fractures!Shizune in Comipo…
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by Sadako
Sat Aug 22, 2015 3:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

I am so glad I was curious enough to read this because this is wonderful. I will be eagerly waiting for the next update. That’s very kind of you to say, thank you! Very happy to have you along for the ride. :D Perhaps it's because your avatar is a picture of the girl from Ringu which freaks me out ...
by Sadako
Sat Aug 22, 2015 3:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

While it's depressing to see Misha and Shizune grow apart like that, at least it seems like there's hope for them becoming friends again. Assuming nothing happens to Misha first(or she turns out to be the killer or something :) ) The story of Shizune and Misha’s estrangement is, for me, the saddest...
by Sadako
Sat Aug 22, 2015 3:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Misha's the killer, Misha's next, or she's tooling up for a manhunt . Only one of these scenarios would be not-okay. :lol: My mind sometimes goes in directions that would make Rin tilt her head ever so slightly. Case in point: I now have Matrix Misha in my head. “We’re gonna need guns, Shicchan. Lo...
by Sadako
Fri Aug 21, 2015 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

10. Still Small Voice Over the next few minutes Lilly typed the whole story to Shizune; from receiving the death threats, to the attacks on Emi and Rin, to the origin of the photographs. At her end of the line, Shizune sat and took copious notes, writing on the legal pad with her right hand and occ...
by Sadako
Fri Aug 21, 2015 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Wow. Thank you so much for the kind words, people. It really means a lot that you’re enjoying this. And I’m extremely pleased that my take on the characters is going down well – after all, the originals inspire so much genuine love and affection. I’d hate to get them wrong! (Silly point – my desktop...
by Sadako
Thu Aug 20, 2015 5:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

9. Risk Management A quick check on Emi’s phone revealed three internet cafés within walking distance, although Rin vetoed one immediately. “Not KomiKoffee. I went there once and now I’m not allowed to back.” “You got banned from an internet café?” Emi tugged her hair out from under her scarf, smoo...
by Sadako
Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Awww shit, we're getting the band back together! :D Chapter 9 is called Risk Management . All I'm saying. :twisted: I'm glad to see they're at least trying to sort out their issues with each other. And the stuff about why Rin didn't like the officer was really fun. Part of the reason her perspectiv...
by Sadako
Thu Aug 13, 2015 6:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

8. Two Divided by Zero There were many things Rin Tezuka did not like about Assistant Police Inspector Namba. She didn’t like the way he wore his tie, for example; there was something eerie about the way it was simultaneously loose and lopsided and yet pulled very tight around his collar. It made h...
by Sadako
Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Butterflies and Ice Cream
Replies: 28
Views: 17753

Re: Butterflies and Ice Cream

This is a very nice piece of work. I love how everyone has their own take on Rin, all a little bit different. I seriously think you’ve done her justice – she seems to have lost just a little of her… What’s the best term for the quality of being quintessentially Rin? Rin-ness? Rinosity? Rinnitude! Sh...
by Sadako
Wed Aug 12, 2015 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 63207

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

7. Talking in the Dark Emi could hear Lilly’s voice as she made her way down the stairs, quiet sentences and interjections broken by long silences. One half of a phone conversation. Her voice was coming from the Tezukas’ kitchen. Emi opened the door and saw Lilly walking slowly alongside the counte...