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"What game are you playing, daughter-mine?" "Eh? I don't know wha-" "Yes you do. I didn't say anything when you brought Suzu home last summer, I was happy you'd found someone, you weren't repeating his mistakes. Though I was a bit disappointed you didn't admit that she's you...

You always send me on an emotional roller-coaster! Your Hisao, just like the one in the original VN, has me shouting at him to NOT DO THAT YOU DUMBASS!! And I really like how you show him adapting to her.

Thanks so much, your positive reactions mean a lot to me! Of all the things I've written this was the most painful, involving months of agonising over whether I was portraying Hisao's internal monologue convincingly, justifying his decisions. The re-writes were legion! And thank-you for the word mud...

This one fits between Three of a perfect pair and "You are not alone..." , though there's no need to have read either before reading this one. Some mild smut in the middle. *** " 'A beginning is the time for taking the most delicate care that the balances are correct.' " Suzu's ...

Intriguing... I'll be here when you've got more to tell us

sgtpepper wrote: ↑Fri May 31, 2019 10:22 am I just thought it'd be a very Miki-way to end that part of the fic

That was my take-away from what you wrote, showing that she's not completely comfortable with receiving and expressing affection

That was adorable!

sgtpepper wrote: ↑Wed May 29, 2019 1:17 pm pretty sure including "gaylord" in your Miki fic is in of the terms of service for the forums

Damn, I've been doing it wrong...

Dammit Mrs Nakai, did you have to live up to every cliche about over-protective mothers?! At least our heroes are being mature about the whole situation. I can't remember any fic where Hisao's dad is the only one unsure about his offspring's choice of partner, it tends to be his mum who is wary or h...

Thanks Mirage! I went backwards and forwards several times on the lyrics (I've had a lot of love for The Cure for decades and last thing I wanted was to infringe copyright, hence linking the band's home page) and I didn't like any of my solutions so I went for an approach that would allow the reader...

Although this contains no smut, it does feature mature themes and may be upsetting. The music video playing in the common room at the start is Lullaby by The Cure . *** We're sitting in the common room on another tedious Saturday afternoon. We should be making the most of the mid-September weather ...

Another great chapter with significant development for Hisao. "You are not an island" is an important, humbling, lesson - learning it had a profound effect on me.

Thank-you all! I wasn't even working on the second one, it was just an outline about old man Hisao looking back on his time with Saki, then... “Well, Hisao Scroff, you might be the first, but I don’t think you’ll be the last to be subconsciously influenced by popular lyrics.” ...I heard True Love Wa...

He pulls himself up from the seat and shuffles to the kitchen. His body tells him to eat, to drink; he obeys though there is no savour to be had. As he washes the dishes he watches the children playing in the park across the road while the young mothers enjoy each other's company, one eye on their o...

It always seemed to me that you have a special affection for Shizune and Kenji, I bet you didn't have to think twice about which pairing to choose.

I found this heart-warming but the thought of a Shizune-Kenji alliance running amok after graduation is more than a little scary...

So much fun! Wonderful dynamics between Miki and Hanako, and Naomi and Natsume.