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I'm going to go ahead and assume this was the neutral ending to the route. Certainly was resolved in a very odd way...

In my personal and blunt (also very general, as I don't want to write up a pastebin of critique that doesn't get read by the author), these last two chapters were extremely dull to me. I read them word for word, but it seems like similar conflicts with minor changes are coming up in the wrong part o...

This is definitely very well written. Will have to keep tabs on this one.

I apologise for resurrecting this thread, but my God that was fantastic! I have now made it a mission to read every single one-shot of yours. If they are all as spectacular as this, well... :mrgreen: Heh, I'm glad you enjoyed. You'll probably feel mixed about some of my work if you read from the ve...

I find it somewhat harder to ignore that you have to learn part of a game's jargon to get the finer details, and that it's an intentional move by the author, as stated in the header... I'm sorry for writing something that I enjoy, Master Silentcook. Since it appears having fun and writing something...

Just an FYI: if you've never played League of Legends, you will not understand this story in the slightest. Have You Seen My Bear Tibbers, Hisao? I grin widely as the word 'victory' sprawls across the center of my screen, leaving me with a button to exit the game that I just so happened to have dom...

Doomish is rather busy with numerous other projects, mate, so just give him time. It'll be updated when it's updated. Ah. Well then, my impatience was rewarded with a generic 'it'll be done when it's done', and not even from the author themself. The world is essentially telling me to be patient. Fa...

Oddball wrote: I may hold the record here for most naked characters in a story without having any sex scenes.

Challenge accepted.

Still love how you're working through this. Keep up the good work.

Do you ever stay in the threads for more than, like, half an hour after posting? http://pastebin.com/rKppj63L Couldn't today, had work. But yes, I actually do, just normally switch back to anonymous. In response to the critique though, couple of things: I wasn't referencing the two having sex ON th...

Going to be writing a couple of successive pieces that really won't deserve their own thread, so they'll be posted here. General idea is Hanako and Hisao taking a trip to the city and staying with his parents, so it should be good fun to write. A Breath of Fresh Air Part One I breathe out heavily a...

I haven't commented on this series before, but I have been following it since the beginning. Here's my personal opinion: I love it. As soon as I got over the odd formatting and kind of transfer of perspectives, I've enjoyed it immensely. I generally dislike OC fictions for KS; particularly because p...

Yeah... Just take the title as a warning. The End Isn't What You'll Be Expecting ... “Surprise, Mister Nakai! It's a castration!” Sorry to disappoint you, but that was totally what I was expecting. Heh, I led it on far too much. Couldn't think of any other title, though. Was just challenging myself...

Katamari Taromacy (Quick Story #2 - Approx. 10 minutes spent writing) My eyes peel open, the crust of the greatest slumber of my life wearing off. No, I'm not kidding. I just slept incredibly. There is truly no other way to describe it than that. In a good mood, I roll out of bed and pop open all o...

Kyvos wrote:Uhh. Why was the Nurse nude? Up until he brought up Hisao hanging out with women, I was expecting some Banda shit to go down.

I feel like it's the same answer to 'How many licks does it take to get to the tootsie roll center of a tootsie pop?'

The world may never know.

Other than myself.