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Doomish wrote:Hisao's not genre savvy enough to think of that, even in real KS! :p

Awesome fridge logic.

Very nice. I was confused in the beginning, though. Hah.

GG Crono wrote:I almost didn't read this one because of the thread title. But I'm glad I did.

Me too. Aha.

My only real issue with this fic is the title. You should probably let the reader decide if it's depressing or not...unless you're referring to the fact that Rin's depressed?

Great, but...

He unfortunately did. The scene flashed again in his mind like he was replaying it in a visual novel.

...Really?

Aha!...Did not see that coming.

I think apologizing for your situation beforehand would be both impersonal and...well, not very meaningful. You've certainly got my sympathy, but I don't think it matters much to you (and it really shouldn't, since the cutting is not something to be proud of). And you obviously already know that you...

I have faith that Doomish will not disappoint.

Damn, Doomish. You're crazy good at this.

Hm, maybe I should try Cutter again...

That's the other thing. Aren't you afraid of people complaining about how you didn't nail Kenji down right? And I think it'd be just plain hard to write for Kenji when you nor your team concieved him. So does it really have to be Kenji? Is it really not better in the long run to at least have an ori...

This has become a discussion of the transgendered character now.

Aha, no body horror, but you assured us tragedy shall always seep in no matter what you try to do. And I'm pretty sure you're not trying to make a fluffy story, so I can expect much drama (of course, the prologue there already told us as much). And Mutou's timeline stuff will probably come into effe...

This is hilarious in an absolutely horrifying way.

I wonder if there's any hope for the others...who knows what will happen? Kenji knew Hisao well, but Hisao doesn't really know the new victims (except perhaps a bit of Miki). He'll probably learn as the torture continues, but...well, again, who knows?

Ahaha, such a cruel cruel ending! I will admit that Hanako's happy bit and the 'progress' Hisao made in learning about the voice made me think there'd be some semi-happy conclusion. But this is a definite, solid end and I thank you for a gripping read. The cycle goes on...chills. As for Cutter...hmm...