I had assumed it was pretty obvious that it was the girls' dormitories. Evidently not.Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑Sat Nov 03, 2018 9:15 am Hmm... At first I equated the "replenishment hive" with the Aura Mart, but that doesn't work out so well... The cafeteria? But that doesn't fit the "weekly"...
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- Wed Dec 12, 2018 9:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 57748
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/31/18)
- Wed Dec 12, 2018 9:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 882538
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Cup & Saucer - A Cute Act 1 for a Pseudo-Pseudo Route (i.e., Hisao x Girl from Girl's perspective). It's serviceable for what it is. It gets Rika's condition pretty wrong, but still (mostly) matches the thematic basis of the Rika concept. By virtue of being an Act 1, though, the best it can be ...
- Mon Dec 03, 2018 7:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 482168
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 10/4/18)
I check my watch again. It’s mid-afternoon now. I’ve been waiting at the train station since a little before noon. The plan was to meet Misha and Shizune when they came back, but it seems they missed their train. And the one after that. Here’s hoping they caught the third. Speaking of which, that sh...
- Sat Dec 01, 2018 9:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 882538
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20181105 Afternoon Astral Projection)
Haven't read it yet, but saw mention that it was initially posted to Pastebin. A lil' detective work later, and here you go: https://pastebin.com/u/Flopsy Two more chapters than were posted here.
- Thu Nov 22, 2018 8:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/24/21--Wet Dreams)
- Replies: 81
- Views: 94287
Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff
An Evening Rendezvous This is one of those few times that lewd for the sake of lewd can run into context issues. This is post-Shizune bad end, but there's no real accounting for the fallout from that event. The girls casually mention Shizune, which would presumably be a sore spot, unless the relati...
- Sun Nov 11, 2018 8:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 882538
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20181105 Afternoon Astral Projection)
Birth of a Fighter I like the idea of this fic, but not how it was executed. Setting aside the creative decisions and factual errors, which are both easily excusable, the issue is that the fic tried to do too much at once. Too many plot points and hooks crammed into the introduction - it short-circ...
- Wed Oct 31, 2018 7:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 57748
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/23/18)
Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...
- Wed Oct 24, 2018 8:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 57748
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/23/18)
A nice little piece. I would've liked a bit more detail on Hisao - it reads as though he froze in place once Shizune and Misha walked in, whereas I would expect no end to the stuttering and blushing and general discomfort from him. Much as I enjoy playing up Hisao's impotence (I really do), I wante...
- Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 57748
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 9/29/18)
Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...
- Thu Oct 04, 2018 4:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 482168
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 9/5/18)
Finally satisfied, I place my pen down and review the end result: Dear Iwanako, I’m sorry it took so long to write back. There are several excuses I could make as to why, but the most honest answer is that I simply wasn’t ready. Thank you for the news about our class - it’s good to hear how everyone...
- Sat Sep 29, 2018 6:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 57748
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 6/28/18)
Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...
- Mon Sep 24, 2018 1:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Fresh Start
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4297
Re: A Fresh Start
Honestly, I don't own the idea of Misha swimming - anyone else is free to use it. The important thing is that you don't rely on other works to justify plot points in yours. By pulling from other works, you risk missing the reasoning and supporting details for why a certain decision is made, but that...
- Sat Sep 22, 2018 4:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 421050
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Okay, well, this is about 5 years after I initially expressed my intention to read the fic, and even at that it was pushed up the queue for various reasons, but regardless, here we are. Given I spilled a lot of ink on the idea of feedback and how it should be given, time to put my money where my mou...
- Fri Sep 21, 2018 7:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
- Replies: 51
- Views: 49951
Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
As someone who has been giving Downix feedback , reviews, and advice, I feel somewhat responsible for some of this, and as such, feel I should throw in my two cents. When I initially read the draft of this fic, I hadn't read MTtB - I had no reason to think it would be necessary, and little time to j...
- Thu Sep 06, 2018 7:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 482168
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/5/18)
https://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52& ... 93#p172693
Skip down to Hisao talking to Natsume.