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- Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
- Replies: 145
- Views: 79335
Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Sorry I didn't give a hand proofing this one, I was pretty tied up with some other stuff so I didn't have much free time. I didn't get to tell you the other day but this chapter came out better than you made it out to be, sure festival scenes are always pretty similar but I still enjoyed this. I did...
- Sat Jul 14, 2012 2:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 724792
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/12)
THAT, we can all agree onHelbereth wrote:This whole thing is an erratic page-turner.
- Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 724792
Re: Future Blind
OH GOD, It's killing me too, I'm going to go insane before this endsYourFavAnon wrote:Wait, what?Scissorlips wrote:Future Blind
“I'm not going to graduate.” I whisper.
I feel Death gently nodding behind me.
“I'm sorry.” He says.
And then I wake up.
Why must you always leave so many questions unanswered, man ;_;.
- Sat Jul 07, 2012 11:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
- Replies: 317
- Views: 182454
Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 7/7 Update
Wouldnt 14th century power armour be insane in the first place?Hoitash wrote:Obviously they added the machine gun themselves. It would be insane for 14th century power armor to have a machine gun attached to it.
- Fri Jul 06, 2012 9:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
- Replies: 101
- Views: 56334
Re: Act 2 - Scene 1 - Yamaku, Oh Yamaku (part 2)
Aaaaawwwwwwwww, Rin is just great in this, I think you portrayed her quite well.Helbereth wrote:"Because that's what friends do."
Also,
Shouldn't it say "...stuff in college."Helbereth wrote:"What? This? Yeah, I kinda got into frilly stuff I college."
- Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
- Replies: 101
- Views: 56334
Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/4
Whoah, was that pun intentional or just a spelling error?Catgirl Kleptocracy wrote:Something about it never sounds write when I'm typing it
- Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 482295
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/5
I really enjoyed this scene, and I especially loved the introduction of Miyoto the dress shop owner, he is amazing and I hope we get to see more of him in the future because he is such a funny character
- Thu Jul 05, 2012 9:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
- Replies: 101
- Views: 56334
Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/4
I second this!LOL WUT wrote:Pretty Damn good story if I do say so myself.
- Wed Jul 04, 2012 7:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 724792
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/4)
Yaay! I enjoyed that chapter, but now we have to wait another week
- Mon Jul 02, 2012 8:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 724792
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/25)
Hahaha awesome! Scissorlips needs to put this on the first post with the other fan art stuff.Helbereth wrote:I put together some fan art.
I could imagine Miki drawing this on the chalkboard:
Kiss him, GAYLORD!
- Wed Jun 27, 2012 3:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
- Replies: 101
- Views: 56334
Re: KA 5-year reunion (Lilly's path). Parts 1-3 complete.
Looking forward to reading more :) I just added a huge section to the second part (Rin and Emi) that I hadn't thought of. I know it's a little odd, but I had to set up some conflict somewhere along the line - conflict I later came up with when I wrote out an outline. I kinda approached this story b...
- Mon Jun 25, 2012 11:51 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
- Replies: 145
- Views: 79335
Re: Miki Route (updated 6/24)
( list of incredibly derpy mistakes ) Thank you, sir. All of those are very good catches. I may have to recruit you... I would be more than happy to do any proofreading you may need. I just pointed out quite a few mistakes in Scissorlips' latest update, so I guess I just have quite a good eye for t...
- Mon Jun 25, 2012 11:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 724792
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/25)
Great chapter, but I noticed a few mistakes, and I thought I would point them out seeing as you helped me with my proofreading :) "No, I'll working on that. But later" (where she's talking about the sidekick name) Should say "I'll work on that" “That' right. Well... it's my excus...
- Mon Jun 25, 2012 9:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
- Replies: 145
- Views: 79335
Re: Miki Route (updated 6/24)
Just a few mistakes I noticed when I read the second part again: “We could find always find a way to make it interesting.” Should be "We could always find a way to make it interesting" (you put 'find' either side of 'always') and "conspirationally" Is spelled: conspiratorially an...
- Sun Jun 24, 2012 1:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
- Replies: 145
- Views: 79335
Re: Miki Route (updated 6/24)
Great chapter Meadows! Miki is great and you definitely have her personality down. I also loved the little reference to Suzu playing Battleship in her dream. Keep it up, I've enjoyed this thoroughly so far