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Just looked at the art...

Is Katsuo an alternate-reality version of Spike from Cowboy Bebop? The resemblance is uncanny.

I have a theory that Helbereth is actually the American version of Satoru, and is letting his inner fashonista out by secretly writing himself into his own story.

I'm with Mirage. I always enjoy reading your stuff... I think... but it's just so free-form I doubt any advice or feedback I could give would be helpful. It's certainly unique, though. You definitely have your own voice, which is definitely a plus. I'd just say keep writing. Even if zero people read...

Whatever that may be for Rin and Hisao.

I've got one guess as to what that may be.

Great chapter. Some grammar things here and there, but nothing to be nitpicky about. On the whole, your writing just keeps getting better and better, and Katsuo is only getting stronger as a character. Keep it up.

Wookie wrote:

forgetmenot wrote:
"Hisao, look. You can thousands of stars out here."

I'm guessing you was suppose to add 'see' into that sentence.


Anyway, awesome chapter.

Fix'd. No matter how many times I proofread, there's always one or two things that slip through.

Aaaaaaand, after two weeks, I'm back! Sorry about the lack of consistent updates. I'm taking more time with the chapters as we gear up for Act 3, which is coming up rather quickly! I want to make sure I don't mess anything up story-wise. Enjoy! Also, in case anyone's curious, this chapter officiall...

"Isn't that right Katsuo? Right you are, Other-Katsuo."

Danger Zooooonnneeee

Now, I have to go back to frantically tearing through your story and shoving my feels into the bottom of my stomach.

You're too kind. Thanks for reading!

Oh, shit. This just got interesting. Definitely one of the most unique OC fics I've ever read. I can't wait to see where you take it from here. He slaps his cards down in front of him and returns my steely gaze with a annoyed one of his own. Should be an . It takes me a little bit longer than most p...

Breaker deGodot wrote:

Thanatos02 wrote:I asdfghkjlaksdhghf in an attempt to raise conversation.

...Dafuq is that?

That, my friend, is author's frustration embodied in its purest form.

I always enjoy cute little bite-sized oneshots that make me smile. Nice work. The snowman was a nice touch.

I hate to be so blunt... but this really isn't a story. It's mostly just a collection of loosely related thoughts occurring over the course of what, 20 minutes? Nothing really happens. So what Shizune and Misha arrive at a vacation house? Is that supposed to shock, surprise, or seduce in some manner...

CptSalsa wrote:Foot in mouth award for Hisao Nakai.

Per the usual.

Now for a few homophones: "Stationary" means "not moving," while "stationery" is the noun referring to paper, envelopes and the like. "Coarse" is the adjective similar in meaning to "rough," and "course" is the action blood takes while ins...

Sorry for the lack of updates this past week and a half. Took a week off for vacation. Anyhow, I'm back now. Enjoy! Scene 15: Near-Life Experience I slog through the rest of the afternoon, drained of what little energy I had earlier. Misha gives me a few concerned looks during English class; I gues...

Thanatos02 wrote: