impressive, you've managed to turn Hisao into a jerk to rival shinji matou.
I may not be sympathetic to him most of the time, but I hope Kenji gets to beat the hell outta Hisao.
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- Wed Sep 08, 2010 1:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Victory Day
- Replies: 51
- Views: 24549
- Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Emi's Winter Break
- Replies: 52
- Views: 28092
Re: Emi's Winter Break
^well that and making a good portion of the readers ask themselves 'wth?' anyway...
I like how it's going. extra points for the choice of presents, I had a problem with that myself.
I like how it's going. extra points for the choice of presents, I had a problem with that myself.
- Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices Hanako ed.)
first she grabs him, then she moves her arms and then she put all of her weight on Hisao's shoulders. he can't fully support it and his legs buckle, on the way down his head comes into contact with the wall, blurring his vision. she then uses him as a giant pillow. since It's not mentioned explicitl...
- Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices Lilly ed.)
last part: Hanako end. if it sounds kinda Fateish, that's what you get after doing a full run between writing these last two. I slowly walk up the stairs to the third floor and turn to head down the hall. Hi: “Room 305, room 305...” It dawns on me that no one actually took the time to show me around...
- Wed Jul 14, 2010 3:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao's Many Fetishes
- Replies: 46
- Views: 23826
Re: Hisao's Many Fetishes
wow, after reading the comments I was prepared for much worse. my weird level is up there, but apparently not quite as high as the rest.
the big question is: is this practice for even weirder stuff in the final version, or are you just getting it out of your system beforehand?
the big question is: is this practice for even weirder stuff in the final version, or are you just getting it out of your system beforehand?
- Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices Lilly ed.)
Hisao might not know the truth in this case. he left those two for hours so anything could've happened. It might be Lilly lying, Hanako's plan to force them closer together quickly, or it could be something they thought of together. There's no actual proof in any case is there?
- Thu Jul 08, 2010 3:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices Lilly ed.)
Lilly's ending. sorry it took me awhile to finish and post this. I make my way to the tea room. I’ve chosen, and now it’s time to see what happens because of that choice. When I reach the door there’s a growing anxiety, I hope Hanako will understand why I’m doing this. Hi: “ I’m sorry Hanako. ” I op...
- Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices pt3)
the democratic thing to do would be to post both. which i was thinking about doing anyways since I have Lilly's end half done anyways. I'll just change the choices into links for both posts, preserving the choice involved. assuming SC has no objection of course.
- Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices pt3)
-thanks gl4ss, here's hoping that that's the only mistake. -guest votes do count (just avoid the temptation to try and rig the vote) -xuan, i'll count that as +1 for tea room unless you say otherwise -kosher: ah but then they might not read the story or they'll get confused. Current count: 3 tea roo...
- Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices pt2)
part 3. as promised there is a selection at the end. I'll give you guys until... let's say Wednesday to decide. no double voting please. the part marked with (*) is unheard by Hisao. Mi: “Hicchan hurry up!” God I hate that nickname, it’s like fourth year all over again. I get something signed at me,...
- Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices pt2)
really? I can understand it from the first part, not so much after Hanako finally snaps though.
- Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices pt1)
well that would be polite wouldn't it? as for your answer: here's the token author response. any decision should be reserved until the all the information is provided.after all your choice could change depending on the context. Edit: pt2 is now up. there's a couple really bad jokes in here if you re...
- Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (painful choices pt1)
yeah not going to happen. I did call it painful choices for a reason :p. though I will try to let you guys choose the ending, it will be fairly limited.
- Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (Emi story finished jun 11)
Okay, word says there are no problems I didn't tell it to ignore. everyone appears to have the correct dialog and no weird spaces. looks good to go. this 'should' be a four/five parter if everything works out. Painful choices: Hi: “The white one is in motion.” ??: “The-the shadow is ... m-moving in....
- Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter writing (xmas story end pg8)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43860
Re: Summer stories (Emi story finished jun 11)
wow... how did I do that without noticing.? well thanks for pointing that out Xuan. if anyone sees something, go ahead and tell me.
edit:note to self, spend at least 15-30mins editing next piece. thank you esa
edit:note to self, spend at least 15-30mins editing next piece. thank you esa