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Thanks for writing this! Short, sweet, and charming. Sometimes it's nice to just sit back and enjoy a story like this at the end of the day.

Hey there, Mirage! Thanks for the response. I appreciate you clearing some things up and pointing out the flaws in my arguments. I'll try to make this shorter than my last post... —————————— I think that these two lines make it quite clear that he's in some sort of vehicle. At the very least, that's...

Analysis of Until I Rise Again ————————————————— Hello there, NuclearStudent! I'm a little embarrassed that I haven't gotten around to commenting on one of your works sooner, but better late than never, right? I'm glad that you recommended this story to be my first out of your collection of works—I...

Hey Nuke! —————————— In a typical story, we're fed all the necessary backstory right from the first chapter. We are given a clear indication about the history of our protagonist, their current life, their personality, and what their immediate plans are. An interesting difference in perception. As fa...

Hello Mirage and NuclearStudent! I know that I'm not BristerXD, but as someone who really enjoyed this story, I felt inclined to chime in with my thoughts on your posts. You both had some very thought-provoking and interesting things to say! I'm mostly going to try and explain my perspectives on the...

Hey Mirage! —————————— That's some legendary foreshadowing right there. Don't think we didn't notice it. Of course Emi wouldn't like who Hisao ended up with! Very clever, Feurox. Well, to be fair there are several possibilities Emi would not have liked :-) Ah, well. I thought to myself that Emi does...

Hello there, Feurox! Thanks a lot for writing this—it warmed me up like a good cup of coffee. Well, a good cup of hot coco might be more in theme. :D This was an excellent piece—bursting with creativity, charm, and meaning. I really enjoyed trying to piece together all of the little mysteries that w...

Okay, I think I need to explain myself. I assume that it's fairly obvious that I get a real kick out of analyzing other people's stories and trying to piece together the puzzles that authors embed into their writing. However, at times a problem arises... I'm kind of a stupid idiot sometimes. There i...

Hello BristerXD, I just finished reading the first chapter of Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain and… Oh boy… This is magnificent. From a technical standpoint, and I say this with both absolutely sincerity and no hesitations, your writing is the best I’ve ever seen in any story on these forums. ...

Good day to everyone reading this! I've had this story on my radar for the past month, but only now have I had the chance to sit down and read it! I spent about a week getting myself fully caught up, taking notes and analyzing as I went. There's a lot that I want to discuss, so I'm going to run thro...

Lilly's fundamental character flaw as revealed in her route is her fear of confrontation. It's not that she never does it, but she's by nature a very peacekeeping individual, which is part of what puts her at odds with Shizune so often. I don't see it in Lilly's character to "call out" Hi...

Okay! Analysis part two! This post will be much shorter, but there are still some things that I wanted to discuss... Since we've reached the end of Act 2, let's take some time to reflect on where the characters are at, where the story is at, and where the story is headed . Hisao —————————— Hisao is ...

I'm running out of ways to start these analyses... I've been spending way too long trying to think of something clever to say, but I've got nothing this time around. Hehe. Anyway, we've reached the conclusion of Act 2! Right out of the gate, I'd like to congratulate Xeraeo on making it this far—AND ...

Alright! We've arrived at the penultimate scene of the act, and everything is starting to come together. —————————— Right off the bat, the tension that is built up before the pseudo-rejection worked really well for me. Carrying over from the end of the last scene, we spend the first chunk of this sc...

Yikes! A pretty bad typo snuck its way into my last post. ...so I think that he's just keeping Molly's development lighter than Hitomi's development to waste our time setting up something we already know isn't going to happen. Should have been: ...so I think that he's just keeping Molly's developmen...