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Your typesetting is starting to get a little overboard . And by that , I mean WAY overboard. You should take into account the fact that written works usually only make do with italics, and sometimes capitals. You can swap fonts around if you remember to do it consistently, but having four different...

Chapter Two: Nemesis The final bell rings, bringing me out of my own thoughts. I blink and shake my head as I readjust to the now, realising I have no idea what this lesson was. Hope Ritsu will let me borrow her no-- “Aaaah! You drew the newbie!” Ritsu announces excitedly, having crept up behind me...

Good writing. Nice chemistry between your characters, too and interesting dialogue. You might be surprised how common thrown-in English phrases are in Japan, but it doesn't detract from the story to pretend otherwise. Thanks, Mirage! I don't think I'm pretending otherwise, I'm just drawing more att...

I don't know how thoroughly you tried pacing but I found that I could quite easily take a slow read of the performance while the music played. Scripting something like that must be incredibly difficult so I applaud you for that

I like this. I really do. For once, we have a protagonist that is on the heavier side. Cheers, HBH! :D Okay, I was prepared for having to point out a load of spelling errors 'n stuff, but I got nothing. THIS IS AWESOME! :D Oh, I'll slip up from time to time but since I write a lot, I don't think sp...

You've set up a neat twist on the world and I've really been enjoying the ride so far!

Really digging this route, it's been a fantastic read.

Been following this since I came to the site, since I've finally joined thought I'd say that I LOVE this route and Molly is fast becoming a favourite.

Chapter One: Identity The night air is good for me, and the darkness is even better. Within the cloak of night, I can operate with complete impunity. I protect this school and the town below. Yamaku cries out to me. She whispers my name like a siren song. I heed her call. I am Taro Arai but the wor...

Hello, everyone! I'm Sharp-O: long-time lurker, first-time poster. I played and finished KS earlier this year and once I'd read Summer's Clover, I found that I hadn't quite had my fill of this universe just yet! I came here and started reading through a few fics and some were absolutely astounding. ...