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Shining Bright, Despite The Plight “Are you sure we don't need to get you checked out?” I ask, fumbling for my doorknob. It's late, it's... okay, it's not late, but it's dark, and we've had a busy day, and I'm so tired. “I fell in a stream.” Hisao says flatly. “Unless some of the sharks from the be...

Damn this is good stuff. Just... damn. Thank you. Even if there's not much else to say other than that, just knowing for sure that someone's out there makes a big difference to me. I was led to Katawa Shoujo only a couple of months ago by a friend. While anime and manga are not my preferred reading...

This is a fun little story so far, I think it's leading up to Halloween quite nicely. I can't say I've had time to read much else of your writing, so I don't know how much the few things I might point out apply to it, but I hope you'll find these thoughts useful. -I'm sure it's just because I'm so i...

What You've Done Crap, I almost forgot I actually had something to throw in here. There wasn't any particular motivation for this piece aside that it's a good song and I felt like writing. Normally I tag these stories with the name of the character involved, but in this case it would kind of spoil ...

That's a shame to hear, but it all really boils down to what you think works best for your story. So I take it this means you only plan on having one ending path?

Ahem. So, uh. Anyway. -"and tomorrow school if out anyway" - "if" should be "is". -"Hideaki plays with my hands under the covers, holding them tight as we talk." - why do I like this small detail so much? It's sweet, and adds a lot of character to the scene fo...

With my writing load increasing with work started on a sixth story that will be posted (there's another two that are in limbo because one is a sequel to my first story and the prologue to that won't be posted until the rest of the first story has been written, and the second is on the shelf since i...

A nice littler chapter, the action is fun and the dialogue is organic. I thought it was a little odd that she was the one correcting his posture though, since wasn't baseball his favorite hobby before the onset of his condition? And also, my initial impression of Reika wasn't someone who would casua...

Weird introspective pseudo-psychoanalysis applied via Katawa Shoujo fanfiction time: Suzu's parents remind me a lot of my own, and this current exchange between Mrs. Suzuki and Hisao sort of indirectly makes me understand one of my siblings a bit better? Not a similar situation by a longshot, but t...

First off, congratulations on, and thank you for, finishing this story. I'm sure it's been a long and bumpy ride, but you have my respect and gratitude for seeing it all the way through to the end, even if it took a while. Looking back on the story as a whole, I think this final addition wraps thing...

Back in action! It's been a little while since I came back to this story and I had to shake some dust off here and there (and it's also 3 AM so I apologize but even my sorry excuse for a doodle will have to wait), but I am glad to see things back on track. I can clearly see how the new scene diverge...

I don't think this chapter was bad at all, none of the scenes really stuck out as being unnecessary, clunky or pure fluff. It was interesting seeing your character continue to struggle with fitting in, and I'm quite curious to see where the dynamic with the OC introduced in this chapter takes both y...

This third chapter is more sugary sweet romance, and I think it fits the dynamic between Misha and Hisao pretty well. I'm glad you didn't decide to abandon the problem with Shizune entirely though, and I'm looking forward to seeing it resolved in the following chapter or two. Keep up the good work, ...

To begin: should not want. Well, after two weeks of being quarantined, Hideaki finally managed to talk Shizune into letting us hang out together… the three of us. Imagine the most awkward situation you’ve been through, and then double it. That’s what it was like. This prose is sharp, it's clever, an...

I did state that this wasn't a new story since I started this story almost four months ago (just to be clear I started work on this just over a month before I started on a new life), but I decided to shelve it before I finished the first chapter because of one issue with the story (if you go throug...