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Ok, let's see the convoluted bullying ideas for Shizune, Rin, and Emi now!

Long creepy-ass post The more beautiful and pure something is, the more satysfying it is to corrupt it, doesn't it? Jesus christ, man have some decency! That is really, really morbid. Although I will admit that is a fairly well drawn out plan...for a psychopath bent on emotionally torturing a girl ...

Looking back so far, me as myself is OOC in some places. Wut. Not only yourself - Hanako as well. She's beeing stared at from point blank range by some guy she doesn't even know and all she does is blush? That's panic attack material. Then Misha signing a letter with "love" after knowing ...

Raburesu wrote:Misha: "Shicchan's going to be fine, but I think I might die. Am I going to die, Hicchan?"

Where's this from? I don't recall seeing this

Err, yeah. Now kinda starts the all original kickass writing by me, although I will lead the plot to choices that mirror the KS choices as well as the choices you can't influence as Hisao, but I as the main character can. Everyone knows Hisao was a bit dense sometimes in most of the routes anyways....

Gah, all your stories have some kind of deep emotional undertones to them! It pisses me off, but I can't stop reading! Brooklyn rageeeeeeee

HarvestmanMan wrote:When you start writing fan fiction.

Oh wait we all know how that turned out ha ha

Yep, I know how you feel

HarvestmanMan wrote:None of 'em.

I prefer my girls to have noses larger than peanuts and eyes smaller than tennis balls.

Well you could assume they'd have normal human proportions when you date them? Although hair wise, that might be a stretch. Like the dark purple hair on Hanako, mehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

It's true, Hicchan . Besides, don't you want to spend time with us after school, Guids?" If you rip the text, at least change the names ;-) Still not very much in terms of deviation from the original plot - just substitutions of one thing for another. I know, I dunno why I did that in the firs...

kosherbacon wrote:Thanks for the continued kind words, guys.

So YOU'RE GOOBERLIBERATION from fanfic.net! WTH! (In a good way)

Well, the writing is not that bad, but can you give me a reason why I should continue reading this? The plot is exactly the same as in the original with only a few lines of dialogue changed (and the nurse visit skipped). Add to that the plot-hole of why two apparently healthy people should attend Y...

I liked Rin the least out of all the girls, so I didn't mind the ending too much. She was too goddamn indirect about everything that I couldn't get into her story. Now if Hanako's ending was like that, I'd be bawling my eyes out. Hehe.

Chapter 2!...and yes it's still crap. Although now I'm going to start straying away from the source material into original stuff at this point. And lower your expectations before reading, thanks! I groggily force myself up from my bed, cursing the sun and all that is bright while doing so. Sitting ...

When you write a god-awful fanfic.

Which is me in this case.

Yep, definitely. I'm debating whether to uninstall it so that I'm not tempted to read it a lot, or leave it as a constant reminder that it's there. Eh, I'll probably end up forgetting about all the key stuff thanks to ME3 and DotA 2 and messing around in Skyrim. But still, I'm definitely revisiting ...