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Also, parenthesis seem to destroy the narration. I spend time figuring out how to insert certain phrases. Just putting the part that's hard to work in is counter productive. You'll need to work harder, yes. It'll help you expand and put more details and describe what people are feeling more easily, ...

The car pulled up in front of the Shoujo Inn. It was a fairly large building, although quite small compared to the hotel complexes out in the big city. It was twelve stories tall, and all the rooms were large enough that they all had a terrace overlooking Katawa City’s countryside. Beyond a fenced o...

The tiles/chess playing thing is interesting, I really think one bishop is placed on white and one on black though.

Edit The first post was an exercise in setting and details, seeing if it would work. The second was an attempt at writting Rin, and doing dialogue. I was afraid that it was cluttered. Will hopefully get a chance to extend this today, I'm working on fixing a car right now (nevermind, the tool went m...

4/5. Can I actually give some criticisms? It's still pretty good, let me say. A paragraph should make an entire idea. This isn't a high school english paper, so you can totally make short two or three sentence paragraphs. When it cuts to the teacher, the place and person and actions are all differen...

I wanted Shizune first time through, thought Lilly was right and got stuck with Emi cause I thought not exercising was stupid. Second I get Kenji's end. I'm going to simply replay as I did before, which would get me a Rin or Emi route.

Shujoxa wrote:Shizune:

...no, joking, but I'll laugh if it's something similar.

This fits far too well. The lalalala's the background screamers make get replaced with Misha's "wahahahas" all over the place.

I like it! I had an idea, if you don't mind me posting it?

Looking at the two of them, no one would ever guess this duo was known as possessing the greatest intellect the civilized world has ever seen. Sherlock Hisao was a man oozing of moderation. He was moderately rugged and hansom, his hair was moderately long, his voice was moderately deep, he dressed m...

In a program like photoshop or gimp or paint.net, you have the advantage of making copies of things and undoing mistakes. I found a tutorial which will help you make the lines once you get used to using a program, but I'd have to look through my DA account's favs. Last I looked it was messed up. Any...

The issue here is, if you get to sleep with multiple women, the women will sleep with multiple men.

This is fairly good. Familiarizing yourself with an image editor might prove useful for you. I have no criticisms here. I wish I was as inspired visually, i gave up on my art a while ago.

It's fine. The girl didn't pick your route, and look how great we all turned out!

I dislike the harem idea. The woman deserves all your love and tenderness.

Murders! Mysteries! Memories! Mammaries! Manliness! More alliteration! The pen is mightier than the sword, yet the sharpest of intellects are the most dangerous weapons of all! A web spun by the differently abled entangles an entire city. It will take a special kind of detective to unravel the shrou...

So I guess you prefer the chocolate? I don't blame you. I might not have said it so clearly, but the fact she was there and so persistant, even when you wanted to take other routes, was a downer.

Also, something like sand paper sprinkles or sandpaper chunk would work.