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so please ponder these things, rather than immediately assume OOC-ness. I really hope you're not offended by what I said, because there were no bad intentions. As I said, it really seemed OOC while the act was in motion; when the end of the scene or bit occurred, everything was righted and everythi...

I actually thought about the Shizune thing while editing, but I guess I just didn't think of anything. I figured her saying she wouldn't go so easy on him next time would do the trick. If you want my personal opinion, I would have written it more like she gets extremely pissed and tense after losin...

Probably the best chapter so far there. Couple of things that happened at first seemed a bit OOC, but coming to the end of those scenes, they all kind of came together and made everything seem like it fit well with each persons character. Glad you like it. Any specific examples of things that seeme...

Probably the best chapter so far there. Couple of things that happened at first seemed a bit OOC, but coming to the end of those scenes, they all kind of came together and made everything seem like it fit well with each persons character.

This story is really, really going to end up rubbing me the wrong way, I can already feel it coming..

Suriko wrote:The new projects aren't related to Katawa Shoujo in any way.

Good. There's no reason for them to be related to KS.

I fucking love you.

Rin notices I'm staring and stops with the sandwich just a few inches from her mouth. "You look like you found out you're pregnant," she says. "Say what?" "What?" "I mean, why do I look like I'm pregnant?" Had me laughing here. Not going to lie though, got a ...

Wrote this quickly for a little Secret Santa thing I participated in. But... How On Earth Will This Ever Work? I step out of the lab, unbelievably disoriented and slightly tipsy from the chemicals that just surrounded me in a cramped tube. Everything just feels... massive? After a few more moments,...

Brogurt wrote:But he said that you were behind, Slowpoke~

We are behind because of some unexpected things that popped up on my end, but we finally got started on it and will hopefully be able to share the first part fairly soon.

Just an FYI: I'm not dead. Will get back to writing a few one-shots soon, currently writing something KS related with another author in the community that we can hopefully share soon.

This is very easily one of the most well written series I've read, and I'm certainly glad it doesn't seem too close to completion yet. Very subtle, thought provoking lines for sure. Definitely appreciate what you're doing as a writer.

Man, the sort of reverse idea of bad end = relationship and good end = them broken up, but getting closer on more realistic terms would have probably eaten me alive with good and awful feelings.

The last lines of the latest chapter are the opening lines of the very first chapter of the story. That was the neutral end. There being no "Next" just like in the bad end means there's nothing after it. Which I enjoyed as always, by the way! I don't think a story's length is ever really ...

The build up has got to have some form of payoff. Made me scream internally a bit when 'things were getting better'.