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Nice subversion of the prompt

Oh man. You sort of wrote an anime set in the KSverse with this fic, and to me that's a good thing. A lot of originality on display here with the different aspects of the story's speculative elements being slowly explained over the course of the story to keep it engaging. Like the concept, like the ...

Yeah I don't have a lot more to add besides to add my agreement that it's a good story and well-written.

Feels kind of like an in-between chapter. I am glad to see the Saki-Chisato drama fading away to focus back on Hisao and Saki scheming to stay together. That's the real conflict I'm still here to see resolved. Also I did notice your little shout out lol.

ayyy it's this story. You know I'm a fan and that I think it's long past time it was uploaded. I'll look to give a re-read sometime and leave some more detailed feedback. In the meantime, I hope others find it and enjoy. I don't think it's really even an "out-there" story concept.

Lilly is a centerpiece in everyone's stories it seems. Taro was an interesting choice for a focus character as well. I have to say I think the idea of people mourning at Hisao's funeral is a bit cliched, but this one was still interesting due to the different perspectives and all of the lore-buildin...

Oof. Kenji and Akira are quite the sensible pairing, and it's a bit surprising that no one has put them together before now, but this story also went in a much more serious and dramatic direction with them than I would have expected. It's well-written, but it feels like it's cut short--a conflict be...

This was an interesting format with the constant suggestion of things that have happened elsewhere, offscreen. It makes you wonder what Saki was like before she passed away. It's also interesting to see that she was quite the alpha personality, if the story is anything to go by, which is different f...

D'aww it's cute to see Good Lilly after having her evil twin stuck in my head for so long. Though it's interesting to see yours still has a knack for social engineering, even if she's using it for benign purposes.

Thanks for the comments. All I can say about Lilly's portrayal here is that I aim to please. Speaking of Lilly, looks like it's contest time again! Not much to say about this one except that I finally did a "serious" story aka one that at least doesn't have any silliness or smut. Maybe the...

Obviously I have been looking forward to this chapter and you know why ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) But that aside, while it is quite sad in many ways, it also feels hopeful in that Hisao and Saki are more comfortable with each other and able to find solace together. Even if they are both suffering, they are at a po...

Yeah this is a good supplement to the game's story. In particular I think you nailed Lilly's character.

Someone other than Hisao with heart problems for once. The gift that they got for him was quite appropriate, too!

"big ugly" made me laugh out loud

I love the idea of Miki giving Hanako some rough love. Really, any pairing with Hanako I tend to be pretty biased in favor of, but Miki in particular makes for a pleasant contrast.

This is another entry for the Discord writing contest. This time the prompt is Meiko x Lilly + School Spirit Rally. It might be a little too similar to my previous one, but it was either this or another Kenji story, so meh. At least there's no sex this time--at least not during the story! --- An Eve...