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by Decaying_Orbital
Sun Dec 05, 2021 8:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 38358

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

Mirage_GSM wrote: Sun Dec 05, 2021 6:49 am To Prime or not to Prime
This got me to legit laugh until I nearly cried. I could totally imagine the look on Emi's face of; "You've got to be kidding me Hisao?" :D

Kinda wish I knew about this earlier I'd have taken a prompt. :D
by Decaying_Orbital
Tue Nov 30, 2021 3:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 883240

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Maid In Hell: Starring Shizune by Murex.)

Oddball wrote: Wed Nov 17, 2021 11:54 pm
Maid In Hell: Starring Shizune by Murex.
This actually got me to laugh a few times, I'd have loved to seen where the author would have taken that story.
But I do know one thing now, some future story of mine will likely include some cosplay just for fun.
by Decaying_Orbital
Sat Nov 27, 2021 11:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shards of the Future.
Replies: 5
Views: 3906

Re: Shards of the Future.

Part three is nice, but in the final scene you are skipping back and forth between past and present tense a lot. You know, I think I might have actually used the wrong revision, now that I looked the post over. My stories have been typed as text docs and usually go though a revision or two. I'll go...
by Decaying_Orbital
Sat Nov 27, 2021 3:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shards of the Future.
Replies: 5
Views: 3906

Re: Shards of the Future.

This is the fourth story in my "Shards of the Future" story arc. As of this posting I am unsure if I have anything else to add to this series, so for now I consider it complete, but that's not to say I might not revisit this timeline/arc at some future point. This story is titled "Div...
by Decaying_Orbital
Sat Nov 27, 2021 2:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shards of the Future.
Replies: 5
Views: 3906

Shards of the Future.

This post will catalog the last 2 stories for my "Shards of the Future" story arc. This is a collection of work stemming from a "Bad End" Emi timeline, in which Hisao got Shizune's attention during Act 1, effectively branching off the "Slow Recovery" scene but looping b...
by Decaying_Orbital
Fri Nov 26, 2021 8:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 7679

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

Also a very good story! That said I liked Emi's version better. While Emi's tale was very emotional, Shizune's version was more matter-of-fact - at least for most of the time. And that's okay, because that is what Shizune is like, so I'm sure it was intentional, but it took away a bit of the story'...
by Decaying_Orbital
Fri Nov 26, 2021 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)
Replies: 13
Views: 12766

Re: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)

this is some good shit! I prefer "gem" :wink: Really well-told story and powerful internal monologue! It is very rare to find a story that short that nevertheless manages to say all it needs to. Thanks for the kind words, I'll be honest I was a little hesitant to post the works at first. ...
by Decaying_Orbital
Wed Nov 17, 2021 4:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
Replies: 52
Views: 58027

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/11/21)

I fully enjoyed reading this so far. Akira and Hisao's dynamic is quite enjoyable. I had quite a few smiles reading the various chapters. The original characters are also very well realized with a style of their own. There was only one thing that stood out for me as something to critique. In that wh...
by Decaying_Orbital
Mon Nov 15, 2021 2:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 7679

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

Thanks for the kind words Oddball. I'm also glad you liked my take on Shizune. I was trying to get across how she had changed in the decade following the events of the VN. I'm not sure if people quite realized it, but there are in fact small differences between both Emi's and Shizune's tellings on t...
by Decaying_Orbital
Thu Nov 04, 2021 10:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 7679

Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

This is a companion Epilogue to my prior release of: Dead Heat, an Emilogue . Both works can be enjoyed independently of each other. However, this one has greater details of the time covered. I hope you enjoy reading it. ------------------------------------- Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue. It's been ...
by Decaying_Orbital
Tue Nov 02, 2021 12:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)
Replies: 13
Views: 12766

Re: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)

Did not expect to find a gem like this one when I logged on today. Seriously, this goes into my fanfic bookmarks without a doubt. Really interesting turn of events, and something I can relate to on a personal level. And it's short enough to not lose that impact. :) Thank you for the kind words Otak...
by Decaying_Orbital
Tue Nov 02, 2021 11:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who was your first Katawa Shoujo Girl?
Replies: 36
Views: 40210

Re: Who was your first Katawa Shoujo Girl?

For myself like many others have already stated I ended up with Emi and the her routes good ending. It really does pay to take advice from others during her route. I very much enjoyed Emi's routes even her "bad ending" I felt was impactful. I think she's the type of person that I'd want to...
by Decaying_Orbital
Mon Nov 01, 2021 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)
Replies: 13
Views: 12766

Dead Heat, an Emilogue (A Post Bad End Emi Epilogue short)

Hello all, I'm new here and I'd like to share what will be my first piece of published fan fiction regarding Katawa Shoujo. A post Bad Ending Emi Epilogue. Which assumed that Hisao had gotten Shizune's attention during Act 1 and obtained "Slow Recovery" only to return to Emi's main path. T...