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Diachi tilts his head before asking, “What’s up Akira? Did you forget something?” You forgot something. ;) Wait, what'd I forget? Also, try to be consistent in how you order names. I don't personally have a preference, but pick one and use it. Remember that everyone in your story is thinking in Jap...

Leaty wrote:Whoa, a new author that actually takes my comments to heart? Christmas came early!

Of course I take them to heart. You're a good author, I'm not, so if have to be Hisao level stupid to ignore advice from really any author on here.

Sooooo what you're saying is to rename the character? Okay, I'm fine with that.

Damnit Hanako! Just leave on the train so Emi and Hisao can get together already!

I see a group of five students made up of two girls and two guys. Wait... 2+2=... I'm interested: What's the fifth? An alien? I sing and I can code. That's an... interesting hobby for a dyslexic... Not the singing of course. And is your Akira a boy or a girl? So far it's hard to tell. My gut feelin...

Hello to all! I am excited to share the first part of my story, and it will be a OC heavy one. I apologize if that turns you away, but if it doesn't, then by all means stay! I am not a very experienced writer, but I hope to improve that as time goes on. Okay, so first things first: I have varying am...

I have to just add here my thoughts about the chaos of a large family being "appealing". Coming from one, I can tell you that the grass is always greener.

I think that this is a very neat little one shot that would be well made into a potential story, if not for that last line. Kudos to you though.

Let me start off first by saying that you are a pretty good writer. I've written a lot of short stories and proofread even more, and I'm still bad, so kudos to you. Second off, I like this character. I personally don't care about the stigma against inserting yourself into a story (if that is indeed ...

Incidentally, I'm a huuuuuge Super Meat Boy fan. Nice avvie.

Thanks! I had a hell of a time trying to set my avatar, considering the size restrictions.

Let me just say that this fanfic is easily my favorite one I have on my watch list right now, and all I can say is that I love the story so much, please don't ever let this die.

You, I like you. These shorts are very well done, all I can say is keep it up. I'd say more, but given that I have no clue how to write, I feel I would just mess things up.

oh god

I swear, if you kill off Lilly I will find you, and I will kill you

Finally got all caught up on this! I have to say, it's a goat piece of writing, and not at all what I expected. I was hesitant to read it because I had thought it was going to be a depressing epilogue of a depressing ending, but I'm glad to see that this isn't the case. I have some predictions as to...