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You left out who was the wife. ... ... ... It was an excellent idea. Don't blame me if I kinda sorta headcannon this. So yeah, thanks for this one. Oh and : Shizune, crossing her arms and making her pouty war face, after I had asked her to say cheese. In hindsight, that wasn't a very bright idea . S...

Commenting while reading is an efficient way of providing useful feedback on the spot. Yep. I'm doin' it. Hiding under the bed Great minds think alike. Only I'm not a great mind. Anyway. Kiss scene Imagining this taking place in curtain-dimmed morning lights in the sleepy warmth of a summer morning ...

Interesting premises, using underused characters along with an OC with much potential, written by Oddball?

I'm sold.

For some reason or another, I've been very anxious to write this chapter specifically. It's nothing really special but I felt it was different from the others. Don't know why. Enjoy! It's much more action-packed than your other chapters, I felt. There's a lot of short and relatively unconnected seq...

Chapter 4 has been altered with the newer sequences. Dream sequences are tricky ... particularly one where everything morphs into a new location ... but I thought you handled it well Never read Dune, so I'm glad it wasn't full of incomprehensible to non-Dune readers jibberish Well I try, and I know ...

"It's big post time!" "No Flutist no!" So I've read all of your feedback, and it was indeed very useful. Of all the ideas you suggested, I've chosen to 1-Stop the dream at the the school of worms scene, as Helbereth suggested. It's true that the rest is pretty much a slow transi...

*Has yet to devise a polite way to express how he loathes ready-to-go aphorisms without coming off as a douche* Other than that : Hey guys, I don't want to sound needy or anything (pls coment k? lololo), but Nemz's reaction kinda leaves me wandering if other people feel the way he does about this c...

The problem with Rin would be that you should kind of monitor her to make sure she doesn't wander off, wonders aloud why the queen of england that is sitting next to you is wearing her curtains (how rude), that sort of thing. It'd get tedious after a while. Occasionally hanging out with her would be...

Mint wrote:Hanako's good ending.

All of my yes.

I prefer not having my face punched by a student in the morning. What do we do with a grinning doctor What do we do with a grinning doctor What do we do with a grinning doctor Early in the mor~ning? Punch his face in an unconscious state Punch his face in an unconscious state Punch his face in an u...

Oh, Scissorlips, you know I can't come up with an original way of telling your fics rock so hard they waltzed to outer space and will spell the doom of a celestial object sooner or later every time, don't you?

Very nice, very nice indeed. But yes, watch the formatting, it's a bit heavy as it is. Otherwise I have no complains. At least, nothing objectively wrong. There are a few things that bugs me (just a tiny bit) , like Hisao speech pattern suddenly being a bit more colourful, including words and expres...

I just re-read The Reason. True, there are similarities, though they're completely unintentional. The Convergent Evolution Theory applies to writings too, it seems.

The first section tells us absolutely nothing new though, which is why it feels pointless. Well I have to set the scene at some point. Didn't feel like it dragged on too much. How is Iwanko not already settled? Hell, I thought it was plenty settled even before the random letter arrived; life happen...

>My goals are floating away from me in the dream, and now I'm falling eternally You see, these events are just so commonplace that it's hard for me to give a shit when they come up. It bears way too many similarities to the version of the trope where he's chasing or running after something that kee...