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by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 19810

Re: Touchdown Breakdown

Sup. Anyone who's ever said that they've been mad enough to see red is a liar or lives in a cartoon. Real anger is a whole bunch of different colors. Real anger is a mixture of puke green and rust brown, with plaster white and rebar grey thrown in. Then you apply heat and pressure until it turns int...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 43029

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Eleven 7/21/12)

You are an Ass Face, you know that? With each new part we learn more about Hisao, and we progress into Yaso 's life, and then BAM Part is over and I have to wait for the next one. You Cock Tease. Why are you quoting what's on my mind verbatim? N'wahs are not welcome inside my head. Pls get out of m...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:29 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Can't get Hanako out of my mind.
Replies: 84
Views: 25058

Re: Can't get Hanako out of my mind.

In the words of the Wise man and Humorist Pierre Desproges : 'One can laugh of everything, but not with everyone.'
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Jul 13, 2012 11:02 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Can't get Hanako out of my mind.
Replies: 84
Views: 25058

Re: Can't get Hanako out of my mind.

Funerals' true purpose is for the deceased close ones to share their pain, plain and simple. You feel better when you see you're not the only one who feels like shit. As Hisao himself puts it during Hanako's route, 'Misery loves company'. The real question now, sir, is would you accept an Internet B...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 12, 2012 5:48 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Can't get Hanako out of my mind.
Replies: 84
Views: 25058

Re: Can't get Hanako out of my mind.

1) Does it matter? It'll fade over time anyway. You are obsessed with Hanako. Use that. You said you're a cynic, well, get that to working. Turn your obsession into something useful. Change yourself for the better. I'll cut the pep talk and say it outright : Unless you're really, really obsessed wit...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 12, 2012 2:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 720755

Re: Almost Familiar

"I give to you the destiny of Faith, And you will bring its message to every planet of every star in the heavens: Comment as you read, for it makes writers happy." - The Scriptures, Book of Commenting 22:13 I am Suzu Suzuki and a god born of an ostrich and a sloth assumed direct control of...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 19810

Re: Touchdown Breakdown

If Ascended Flutist is still looking for a second to agree on the gravy reading, I'll throw my name in for that. I noticed it more in the first half than the second (the story felt like it smoothed out a whole lot once Miki is called in to talk to the nurse). I think a lot of it comes from Miki's t...
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Jul 12, 2012 5:42 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest
Replies: 13
Views: 4778

Re: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest

Aoi has Porphyric Hemophilia (mouth open, she's already planning to have a bite) and Keiko is afflicted with the early stages of Corprus (Ashen hairs and eyes) . At least in my headcannon. I predict a very lively and harsh Student Council in the coming years. You better keep in line, folks. OT : Thi...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 11, 2012 10:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Familiar (HUGE WIP)
Replies: 23
Views: 8043

Re: Familiar (HUGE WIP)

Rather than just quote it, I'll detail the whole thing. “But I’ll find out. I’ll find my way... it's just that... the way I’ve lived my life for so long... it's hard to throw that away, even if it feels nice to be treated as an equal… Even though I hated every bit of my ‘old life’, it's still a part...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 11, 2012 8:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, complete) (sex)
Replies: 46
Views: 23948

Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, updated pt.2)

It's so good. So well written, with so many good ideas that you exploit better than I do, Dagoth dammit.

At this point I have just one question :
Are you a wizard?
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 11, 2012 8:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 16478

Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/9

Cue bitching about the ending being too happy, too sudden, etc. As far as I'm concerned, the whole chapter is a upward curve leading to the end. The previous chapter provides enough closure for those who prefer a 'realistic' ending, especially if you rework the thing in a slower pace. In a way, it'...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Familiar (HUGE WIP)
Replies: 23
Views: 8043

Re: Familiar (HUGE WIP)

I think I'll make a habit of doing these 'commenting as I read' stuff, because it's useful and fun, so there. Thanks for inspiring those, by the way. veneer And you bitched about 'slaloming'. :mrgreen: Oh, hell, Lilly . How do you even get off on keeping us in the dark like this anyway? Pfahahahahah...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 19810

Re: Touchdown Breakdown

Hisao can't breathe, dummy. He has a heart problem. True. I hadn't thought of that. How does he breathe if he has arrhythmia? I'm not sure if you're talking about a serious flaw in the characterization or not, but that video is kinda hilarious. I played Skyrim JUST ONCE and missed a midterm because...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 19810

Re: Touchdown Breakdown

Another of those commenting-as-I-read thing, because I like it. Hey look, it's a fic from Total Destruction. I like this guy, what he writes, and his avatar. Hey, look, it's after The Bad End. calisthenics Thanks Dagoth for the built-in dictionary in my laptop. She said she hates me, Miki . She thre...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jul 10, 2012 4:52 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 377107

Re: Happy birthday Hanako!

Hello Hanako, it is I, the creepy creature that write sappy-as-shit fanfics about you. Don't be startled by my appearance. Or do, but don't freak out or throw things at me. Thank you. Anyway, It's your birthday, cool. We're not forcing ourselves to be happy on your behalf for your birthday. Well, we...