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Helbereth wrote:I haven't read "Reconciliation", though.

*GASP*
You absolutely have to read it! It's one of the best KS fanfics on the site, IMO, and I know for a fact that I'm not alone in that feeling.

You did an excellent job of re-characterizing Hanako. She seems rather similar to Robanynomous's characterization of her in "Reconciliation", which is a very good thing in my book. Also, the idea of Hanako being a biker babe is REALLY hot :lol: All Lilly managed to pry out of her was that ...

If, for whatever reason, there is a sex scene involving Time Warp, this is going to be running through my mind the whole fucking time:



Don't hate me.

I wanted it to last, yet I plowed through it in order to read everything as quickly as possible.

Tenteke wrote:I listen to Subterranean Homesick Alien by Radiohead while looking at the stars.It's incredibly relaxing.

Replace that song with "The Tourist", also by Radiohead, and you have me in a nutshell. That song is tremendously cathartic, yet somehow relaxing.

As much as I like the story, I can't help but be put off by your characterization of Jigoro. I mean, you're obviously exaggerating his hatred and violent nature for the fic, but I seriously hope you don't think that he would do any of this in-canon, right?

Megumeru wrote:If you've watch the just-released TF2 "Meet the Pyro"

Then you know--if Hanako is behind that mask--that Hisao and Lilly's relationship just snapped her in two

Thanks. I've just lost all desire to ever play TF2 again.

Tomate wrote:
Much better.

I'm going the third the wheat field scene in Lilly's route. I'll admit it feels a little forced on repeated playthroughs (Hisao kind of acts like a prick in the scenes right before it), so it would be nice to see it with inexperienced eyes again.

I'm sorry to see it stop right when I was really getting into it. I really enjoyed Hisao and Lilly's introductory chapter, and I'm curious to see what kind of shenanigans the plot will get into. Like you said, it's just the preliminary stuff at this point. Looking forward to more.

I eat lunch by myself in the canteen, pointing and gesturing to make my order known, and notice Lilly speaking to Hisao. She flashes me a quick, disapproving glare but he has his back to me. Wait, how could Lilly flash her a disapproving glare if she's blind? Anyway, I'm a tad confused by this stor...

Three things:
1. The James Joyce made me lol. I'm such a nerd.
2. Yeah, this has a lot of potential. Keep going, if you will.
3. I dig the title as well. It fits your characterization of Hanako quite well.

Geographically speaking, where in Japan is Yamaku Academy? (I ask for fanfiction purposes, so you could give me some random Japanese city if you want.)

That is simultaneously horrifying and ridiculously cute. I approve.
Seriously, it's odd to see such realistic scarring considering how minimalistic Hanako's scars appeared in-game. Kind of unsettling, actually.

Lilly has got some pretty obvious problems with opening up to other people, leading to her almost leaving Hisao. The thing that strikes me is that even though this problem is quite subtle (compared to the other girl's problems), it ends up having perhaps the most negative effect out of all of the ch...