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- Wed May 15, 2013 12:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shizune's Favor
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3426
Re: Shizune's Favor
Yeah, I just don't get this. I mean I understand what has happened, but not why any of it matters or why I should care. It's a largely pointless anecdote (that in no way suggests the three of them are even remotely capable of pulling off some sort of actual heist) and you completely buried the actua...
- Thu May 09, 2013 7:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
- Replies: 86
- Views: 33197
Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 5/08]
but where is the actual part 3? you already posted this as part 2. unless...
oh man, getting some bad endless 8 flashbacks.
oh man, getting some bad endless 8 flashbacks.
- Thu May 09, 2013 6:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
- Replies: 86
- Views: 33197
Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 5/08]
...eh? wrong file?
Also, boo on the forced chocolate joke. Trying too hard, and not funny without the context.
Also, boo on the forced chocolate joke. Trying too hard, and not funny without the context.
- Sat May 04, 2013 7:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 916
- Views: 728006
Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]
Great stuff, very dramatic!
one problem jumped out at me though, somewhat ruining a nice moment:
one problem jumped out at me though, somewhat ruining a nice moment:
I heard it from Akira. In a few days, she and Lilly are being summoned back to Scotland in a few days.
- Wed May 01, 2013 9:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
- Replies: 86
- Views: 33197
Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/30]
Hmm. I'm assuming he made a similar blunder to Hisao's bad end with her, something about her dad. Can't immagine much else that would make her angry enough to punch someone other than some sort of bullying or harrasment, and Katsuo doesn't seem the type. I'm a bit disappointed there isn't more Hisao...
- Mon Apr 29, 2013 3:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 61007
Re: A Ritsu Route
I don't hate it. Remains to be seen if I actually like it, however.
- Fri Apr 26, 2013 9:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
- Replies: 86
- Views: 33197
Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/25]
Heh! Somehow I just had a feeling this might be the angle you were going with as soon as you were all "it can't be that Rin..." Between that and the constant cake orders it just seemed to make sense.
- Tue Apr 23, 2013 7:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 916
- Views: 728006
Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]
“That won’t be necessary; we should already have everything we need.” Lilly says. “I should be getting to class now, I'm afraid. I am looking forward to seeing both of you tonight.” Considering the way Lilly 'sees', that line strikes me as highly suggestive. Or maybe I'm just a pervert. :wink: “The...
- Mon Apr 22, 2013 6:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
- Replies: 202
- Views: 98145
Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Good lord, the 'Miya-ness' of this chapter is just overwhelming. For every instance of action or dialogue it feels like the world is on pause for three minutes; It's like reading with a strobe light. Not that that's a bad thing, but it certainly makes this chapter feel extremely uncomfortable... as ...
- Sat Mar 23, 2013 9:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Risky Business (Shizune and Hisao play Risk)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4774
Re: Risky Business (Shizune and Hisao play Risk)
Probably because it's something she would almost certainly do. Find a way to also involve pissing off Lilly and you've got the trifecta.CptSalsa wrote:Another thing that I've noticed is that many stories with Shizune involve a game then coitus.
- Tue Mar 12, 2013 4:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
- Replies: 202
- Views: 98145
Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
He's somewhat aware of Hanako's past dealings with Miya, so it makes sense he'd want to give her some forewarning (especially considering her 'Hanakoness') so it doesn't become a huge problem later. Perhaps it's just the verbalization of non-verbalities (or just being far too poetic in your metaphor...
- Wed Mar 06, 2013 2:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Poker Night(Short Story)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6117
Re: Poker Night(Short Story)
Surely Kenji needs to be in on this. And Muto.
- Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734472
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Go get em, Snuzu!
Ah, so much awesome. Thanks for such a wonderful story!
Ah, so much awesome. Thanks for such a wonderful story!
- Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: When Hisao was Rin
- Replies: 29
- Views: 16609
Re: When Hisao was Rin
Here's the ones I know of... Quality and length varies:
Butterflies(aka Rinicisms)
Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
Sweaty Summer Slumber
Entanglement: A Day With Rin
well, and the pastebin of course. lots of stuff there.
Butterflies(aka Rinicisms)
Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
Sweaty Summer Slumber
Entanglement: A Day With Rin
well, and the pastebin of course. lots of stuff there.
- Thu Feb 21, 2013 11:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: When Hisao was Rin
- Replies: 29
- Views: 16609
Re: When Hisao was Rin
That's not true... there have been a few good end continuations (not recently), typically involving meeting one or the other set of parents.
Still that's not surprising. The neutral end is the one that feels most honest, harsh as that may be.
Still that's not surprising. The neutral end is the one that feels most honest, harsh as that may be.