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Nice one - fun and unexpected; fertile ground for future stories I'm sure! Also - seems I'm not the only one with dancing on the mind :D sat all on her tod… is this slang? If so, it's from a part of the world I haven't been to. -- Reminds me of some proofreading edits I had back from Lap recently w...

Ohhh! Greer chapter, and a surprising way to get out from the Saki Rika confrontation - a good subversion indeed.

Rika will be fighting bears sooner than later if she keeps her smoking up ahah!

Oh this is a lovely, lovely piece. It is so much better than I could have imagined, and gave me unexpected pangs of... longing? at some points. The Taro/Saki thing, for one. And all the cast appearances. And Suzu, written in a way that made me feel such empathy for her. This is a classic, mate. I a...

Here's the link to my prompt for Brythain, nearly 2 years late! (Sorry Bry!)

A lengthy boy, so in its own thread. Enjoy!

An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go

Honestly I don't think the timing of this one shot could be better! Makes me want to keep writing about Molly, and cheers me right up after my own story ahah! Shizune absolutely is the best for the job, and it feels like a real tour-de-force for the whole crew to get back and turn the school around....

Well, that was depressing. And that’s coming from me. Really good work though, oddly sympathetic. I’m always a bit hesitant to write Kenji, because I think he’s not as disconnected from reality as most tend to write him - that said, this level of disconnect works brilliantly - and the hint that he k...

Secret Santa Victim: Brythain, Prompt: This is a story about Misha, Saki, a jet fighter, some incense, and a lot of ice cream Brythain’s secret Santa prompt was delivered to me 26th November, 2021. That makes this 2 years late, and also not a Christmas story. So, you’re welcome? I’ve know Byrthain s...

Hope and desire, / All unfulfilled, / Have more than rope / And hangman killed. Stevie Smith Here we are. The three musketeers. The three amigos. Three complete strangers. “So, where do you want to go first, Nakai?” Akio asks, tapping his foot impatiently. Ahead of us, dozens of people mill about b...

It really is a pathetic thing. To mourn a past you never had. Don't you think? Sunjeev Sahota, The Year of the Runaways “You almost never see that over Yamaku.” Akio points up casually as a formation of jet planes soar above us, leaving a clean slice through the clouds above. “We’re not far from th...

An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/528344844452626452/1149273776903692288/An_Empty_Space.png This is a story about Misha, Saki, a jet fighter, some incense, and a lot of ice cream. Life moves pretty fast. If you don’t stop and look around once in a while,...

Another cute instalment, but I think the whole conflict with Saki is difficult to sympathise with Rika, since we haven’t seen her actually be thaaat cruel. Maybe that’s something no that will change though…

A good chapter! I mean, I’ve already said before that you do melodrama, (not a bad thing, you do it very well!). I found the confrontation with Saki and Rika maybe a touch… exaggerated? Like, Saki has been suggested to be a bit of a bitch (and a bit slutty by Roma’s own words), but like what is the ...

A great slice of life update! Not much in terms of plot development, just the sort of actualisation of Rika's desire to take her health more seriously! Still a great read, and very cute too. I like that you've written some hesitancy into the more adult related content, especially because its good ch...

Not another massive comment from me, don't worry! Really enjoying how this is progressing, and it definitely feels like it has a greater narrative focus now, maybe because things have been established and you're clearly more confident in your style. (Or more confident with your Stiles...) Either way...

Finally all caught up, again. :lol: It’s really great that you’re back, and Rika is just such a pleasure! So much sugar, and the drama is done very well, even if at times it feels a bit mellow dramatic. Teenagers are little cringey goblins though, so who’s to complain! A brilliant ensemble too! Also...