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Part 3: Fireflies ----- The sun continues to go down as the twilight of the day begins to take over in the orange and purple sky overhead. I've just been walking and letting Natsume guide me by the arm, not really considering where we'll end up. She seems to have a spot in mind already, and I'm enj...

Zerebos wrote: Pretty much how I pictured Natsume:...

Dude, that's fantastic..hahaha. Glad you enjoyed it! More coming soon!

Good luck with everything buddy! I hope it all works out well in the end.

Part 2: Let the Games Begin ----- "So," I start. "What now?" "I'm pretty full, but...I think I'd like to try some of those noodles over there." Natsume states, pointing her green fingernail over my shoulder. I turn my head to see a small line of people all waiting in f...

Part 1: Rise and Shine (continued) ----- Lost in my thoughts and oblivious to everything around me, I close my eyes while still facing the Spring sky above me. I sink my back into the bench I'm sitting on, allowing my body to relax against its stiffness. I let the inviting sun cast it's warm glow o...

First, as always, thank you all so much for pointing out mistakes and helping me to improve my abilities and fix any issues with the story. So... Can't say I'm unhappy that you skipped the Kenji encounter that seemed obligatory for each route :-) I figured that Hisao waking up early was enough to of...

B e g i n n i n g of Act 2 Part 1: Rise and Shine ----- -EEP- -EEP- -EE- BMPH The alarm clock to my side receives no mercy once again as I cut its cries short. I don't feel quite as bitter towards it this morning though, I'm actually pretty thankful that I'm up early on my day off. Today's not just...

Mirage_GSM wrote:I always tried to be two or three chapters ahead with my writing than with what I posted here.

That's a great idea! I'm definitely going to start doing this now. Maybe I can avoid some mistakes along the way.

Intermission between Acts: I wanted to take a moment before continuing on to Act 2 to stop and thank everyone who's encouraged me and talked with me about this project, whether it be commenting or PM'ing me here, reddit, discord or wherever. I truely do appreciate this community and I look forward ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

Jake Zero wrote:Good luck with that. Mirage is the king of all Grammar Nazis.

Only because it seems to be appreciated here by most authors.

I'll vouch for that!
I'm not sure what I'd do without you, honestly. I knew I was clueless, but I had no idea just how clueless I was until you helped, haha!

Part 5 A Short Trip (continued) Act 1 Finale! Thank you so much for reading! Here's to the future! ----- Choking the fistful of pills down, I decide to pick up one of the books that I checked out of the library earlier in the week. It's some kind of sci-fi novel about a race of creatures living on ...

Congratulations on the milestone, buddy!

I love the story so far. The depth and breath that you gave your story and Saki is a job well done already.

Can't wait to read more!

Mirage_GSM wrote:So Emi did happen I was wondering about that, since you made no mention of her at all so far.

Absolutely! I can't leave the "fastest thing on no legs" out!

Unfortunately, some characters still may not make the cut.

Mirage_GSM wrote:Formatting looks better than before.

Thank you very much!

Part 5: A Short Trip (continued) ----- I sit and talk about classes and the track and field club with Emi for what seems like an hour or more. A quick glance at my wristwatch lets me know that I'm not too far off. It's been about 45 minutes since I first came in the Shanghai and I have about two ho...

Part 5 A Short Trip ----- After finishing up all my homework for the weekend and putting my books away, I realize that I still have several hours of daylight left in the day. I could delve into a few of the books I picked up from the library before, but I hate to waste such a nice afternoon being c...