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nemz wrote:Happy little accidents aren't just for hippie landscape paintings.

The good thing about writing is that unhappy accidents have little to no lasting effect. You can just revert.

Interesting points. Never thought of the first one. The second one, though, would have had thematic possibilities to exploit. I did have plans for that. 8) Incidently, Miya's not having read the letter has solved a transition problem pretty naturally for me. Nice side effect. (It's interesting how y...

It's been a while! Yeah. Sometimes real life is full of stress and you need to spend your spare time calming down (and writing scenes like this isn't all that relaxing). Another great addition, I have to admit I had no idea how you would handle their confrontation. I've planned this scene for a lon...

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II.6. How Do You Think I Feel? Afternoon tea passes the time. Lilly and Hanako are good company. They are careful to talk about inconsequential things, and Hisao is settling into a comfortable routine. His morning runs with Emi give him a se...

I still have 100% but maybe it's the same as in Lilly's bad end? You know, where the chapters are covered in the good end, so the bad end doesn't have its one chapter? :P I'm not sure how they count the percentage, but I'm pretty sure you don't have to see all the text. It's possible to have 100 %,...

And Misha wants to SMELL the letter? WTF? If it's a love letter it might be scented. (Perhaps too obscure?) Actually, I find it stranger that she says these things out loud while they're alone. It must be one of those quirky habits of hers, when she's excited. The "ow"s would definitely b...

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II.5. Feminists The day she has written the letter is Thusday. Friday, then the weekend, then Monday pass and Miya makes no move. Tuesday is the day. It feels... symmetric. The intention is this: go to the male dorms just before class ends, ...

Keneshiro wrote:I've been hooked on K-On, Yuru Yuri and Aria. Any suggestions?

A-Channel
Ichigo Marshmellow
Tamayura
Kill Me Baby
Nichijou
Azumanga Daioh

Actually, it was Buster Bros I had in mind, which was made by Capcom around 1989. :) I thought I didn't know that one, until I googled images. Played it occasionally in the arcades. (I'm really showing my age, thinking of Pooyan. Come to think of it, no mention of pigs should have been suspicious. ...

griffon8 wrote:I feel pretty confident you meant 'fuss' instead of 'fuzz'. Though the mental image is very amusing. Also, 'a maximum of interest'.

Heh, sometimes typos change the meaning around in interesting ways. Edited. Thanks. (And thanks for your response, too.)

Guest Poster wrote:Anyway, dunno about usefulness. Most people who pointed it out considered it a relatively minor thing, so I'm unlikely to go through the whole story to remove them or so.

I agree. It's a very minor issue.

The skipping rocks part you bring up is actually an exception. Most of them are more direct thoughts. Eh, it's kinda to point out. I'm not sure whether you're actually talking to me, or whether you've drawn together Brogurt's and my post, but: Maybe. If you're interested I can go through a couple o...

"A Hanako bad end and a Lilly good end" If this means that Hanako doesn't get her happily ever after and Lilly does instead, I'd have a right to be upset. And it's hard to imagine criticism being so positive if this only refers to a meltdown over whiteknighting and an airport chase. Don't...

There is truth here, but probably not in most of what she actually thinks is true. It's sort of hard to tell (for me) what she actually thinks is true. And that whole deal with being different people in different situations? That's normal. What isn't normal is to think so hard about it. Exactly. :D

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II.4. Pretending On entering his room, Hisao almost steps on a piece of paper. He bends to inspect it. It's ragged edge suggests that it has been torn from a notebook. On the paper are columns of text: tiny kana and kanji spread across the p...