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That's why I think an author's intention should matter to no-one but the author. (And maybe lawyers, in extreme cases.)

It was the "play both sides at once" bit, along with "produced" and putting friend in quotes. Not to mention a "bad" string of pronouns: “Please, forgive her (Miya),” Ms Kitagawa says. “ She (MIya) probably intended to sit this out. A little demonstration for me that s...

Heavy... Also, good work Thanks. :) That's fairly close to the picture I had of her, though without the 'expecting to be murdered while asleep' bit was a new addition. Hiding behind honesty, but what she's really hiding is herself from herself: all the 'facts' about a person still don't tell you wh...

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II.11. Benefits (continued) They have forks at the Shanghai. Ms Kitagawa picks hers up. Hisao picks up his sandwich and takes a bite. The interruption gives Hisao time to assess the situation. He is uncomfortable having the spotlight turned ...

well, this is certainly... different, from what I'm used to see in fanfiction. I have to say, I quite like it Thank you for reading. It's always nice to see new people drop in. :) Good lord, the 'Miya-ness' of this chapter is just overwhelming. For every instance of action or dialogue it feels like...

I posted the first part of chapter 11 of part 2 (ETA:this post opens a new page [at least on my screen], so be sure to check the previous page for the next installment]; the second and final part is already written, so I may be able to post it next week. It's called easy because 90% of fanfic doesn'...

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II. 11. Benefits They have met at Yamaku's gate and are now heading towards the Shanghai. Progress is nervous and slow. They're silently walking side by side. Hisao is unwilling to walk ahead, unwilling to fall behind. Miya? Hisao can't tell...

I can't promise a schedule, but rest assured, I'm going to finish this story. Hooray! Well, I've said it before, but it bears repeating: I'll be along for the ride, no matter how long it takes. Don't feel rushed at all; just post what you can when you're satisfied with the result and we'll be happy...

Is the thread dead? I hope not :( Thanks for reading. Don't worry, the thread's not dead. It's undead; shuffling along at the speed of zombie. A very short scene is already written, but it's so short I decided against posting it. Next "chapter" Hisao will meet Miya's mum, and that's the e...

...sorry if you consider my insight a copy... That's certainly not what I wanted you to get out of it. It's not surprising that you didn't know about this thread before ProfAllister linked to it. I read your post and wanted to link it ('cause I thought you might be interested), but I had other thin...

I was going to direct you to the other thread, and I was also going to point you to Prof Allister's excellent post. I completely agree with him, for example, on Hanako being ISTJ, but I don't buy his Rin: Rin: While INFP seems reasonable at first glance, I think an argument could be made for S, T, a...

Perhaps it's just the verbalization of non-verbalities (or just being far too poetic in your metaphors for the serious business of high school social life), but Hanako in this scene comes across as being just a very short step from utter madness. Seems accurate, actually. Heh, that's pretty much in...

Always a treat to see this one get updated. Thanks. It's nice to see I have still readers, despite my infrequent updates. I'm fuzzy about the basics again - what is this style of narration called? Third person limited? It captures the awkwardness of this scene rather well, but I'm not really sure h...

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II.10. A Measured, Comfortable Distance “By the way, Hisao,” Lilly says. Hanako stiffens, leans forward, fixes her eyes on the table. She knows that she's doing it, doesn't want to do it, but cannot help herself. She wonders, whether Hisao n...

Hi, Thanks for the continued interest, everyone. As I said, I'm not quitting the story, even if I take my time. Two more scenes (if I don't change my mind), and that's it for part 2 and on to part 3, which is the finale. There's a part 4, though it's going to be comparatively short (I think). I've g...