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by Mohn_Jadden
Tue Dec 02, 2014 12:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Decided against stealth posting this time. It was too busy. Anyways, I suppose if one of the girls is going to forgive Hisao, it's Lilly, so I wasn't to surprised when she did so. She doesn't strike me as the type to hold a grudge. Also, I like the choice of condition for Aoi(which I still don't kn...
by Mohn_Jadden
Sun Nov 30, 2014 11:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Yeah. So I guess Brady's mad.

Anyway, sorry that this chapter took so long. We got wrapped up in family obligations and what not. Luckily for you guys we pretty much have the rest of Part 2 planned out, so we can start getting into some better material.
by Mohn_Jadden
Wed Nov 26, 2014 12:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Unfortunately, as it seems with the upcoming holiday (Brady and I both have family to visit) that the next part will be delayed somewhat. NOOO I MUST KNOW WHAT I DID NEXT I AM THE KING OF ROMANCE :( Be patient teeny-tiny heart man. Anyway, Brady and I are going to write some over thanksgiving break...
by Mohn_Jadden
Tue Nov 25, 2014 9:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Unfortunately, as it seems with the upcoming holiday (Brady and I both have family to visit) that the next part will be delayed somewhat.
by Mohn_Jadden
Sun Nov 23, 2014 8:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 690557

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

If I ever had the skill to do a pseudo route for an OC, the girl that Hisao falls for would have a renal condition. Why renal? Because it gives the opportunity to further explore that medical facilities that Yamaku that has on other. In game, all we get beyond the nurse is Hisao making a comment of...
by Mohn_Jadden
Sat Nov 22, 2014 7:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Well, photosensitivity is not exactly something obscure... Everyone who has at one time squinted into bright sunlight can sympathize and has at least a vague inkling of what it it like... And since most people have worn sunglasses sometime, they would have an idea of what purpose tinted contacts se...
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Nov 21, 2014 12:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

My first thought was sun blindness(I'm pretty sure thats a real thing). I can confirm that abnormal photosensitivity is a thing. I've got a mild case of it myself - it's painful to be out and about on a bright day, but it's not so bad that I can't just wear sunglasses and function or that computer ...
by Mohn_Jadden
Wed Nov 19, 2014 11:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

My first thought was sun blindness(I'm pretty sure thats a real thing). As for the chapter itself, it was fun. I like how Hisao doesn't actually like his sweatervest, and how Aoi was wearing one too. Looking forward to more interaction between the two. Well, I never explicitly mentioned Aoi was wea...
by Mohn_Jadden
Mon Nov 17, 2014 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

When I suggested changing the last sentence, I was thinking more of something like changing "I am so looking forward to sleeping for the next fourteen hours." to "I am so looking forward to having to retake the text now." But of course this also works. :lol: Mutou is really leni...
by Mohn_Jadden
Sun Nov 16, 2014 12:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Oh, you don't have to cover him taking the retest - simply changing the final line of the chapter would fix this. But if you don't mind me asking what was your original plan for this? My original plan was nothing because it was nearing a week since the last update and It completely slipped my mind ...
by Mohn_Jadden
Sun Nov 16, 2014 1:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

You did clarify it was a Saturday. Still Mutou asked him to retake the test after school and he never went - whether "after school" meant "after lunch" or "after afternoon lessons" does not really matter. Alright, due to Brady's suggestion we're going to cover that at ...
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Nov 14, 2014 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

You did clarify it was a Saturday. Still Mutou asked him to retake the test after school and he never went - wheter "after school" meant "after lunch" or "after afternoon lessons" does not really matter. Hmm. I guess I'll change the ending a bit. Thanks for pointing th...
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Nov 14, 2014 8:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Mirage_GSM wrote:I don't think Mutou is going to be pleased ;-)
This chapter takes place on a Saturday. I guess I should've clarified that, my mistake.
by Mohn_Jadden
Thu Nov 13, 2014 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 99313

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Sorry for the delay. Brady and I had life things to do. His motherboard just got shipped back, so I imagine it'll be easier to update and write in the future, as well as it'll become easier for us to goof off in Payday 2 or GTA V when it finally releases on the PC
by Mohn_Jadden
Wed Nov 12, 2014 9:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Vision
Replies: 68
Views: 35388

Re: Vision

AntonSlavik020 wrote:
Zarys wrote:It's Lilly or Hanako route ?
Judging by the fact that he woke up naked in Hanako's room, I'd say a Hanako route. Unless Lilly is sharing. :D
Sharing is caaring!~