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It came out non-emotional because Hisao not only had thirty minutes to recover from the initial embarrassment, but also he's only dealing with Misha, a friend. He can manage to remain aloof, and his answers are purposefully aloof, so as to deter her. Same goes with Miki, where he only goes " h...

I don't really feel good about skipping things I have already read now, because I did recently try that, and I all of a sudden stopped at the point were Emi is mocking Misha / Shizune (I don't know, lol) saying her name and I was only thinking 'what?' space bar, space bar, space bar. Good for skimm...

If you aren't confident in your memory, I'd say don't skip. If you know what's going on and what's going to happen, then skip. Act 1 is quite a bit different once you get past day one. So I would never recommend skipping to act 2.

There's always skimming through what you;ve already read.

I assume you don't want to write a novel, so I suggest the "hope and time" route instead of revolving issues immediately. More specifically when Hisao voices his concerns to Hanako, just have her understand, but have her make Hisao realize that it'll take time. You don't need resolution on...

Chapter 10 seemed to resolve emotional issues inhumanly quickly. Those kind of issues can be worked over half a novel. I suppose I have to live with it though, since these fanfics are short stories.

Reading it a second time I noticed a bit of specifics heh [ Congratulations Hicchan ! ] I look over to Misha. She's grinning widely, both hands forming thumbs up. Word sure travels fast here. Then again, we weren't exactly subtle yesterday. Blushing, I reply [ Thanks. ] nervously, then pass the note...

“I… I d-don’t quite understand y-you yet, Sh-Shiina.” And one more person snagging Hanako good ending lines for their alt story good ending :( Add: I think Misha and Hanako have a much better understanding of each other compared to Hisao and Hanako at the end of the Hisao/Hanako good arc. Simply fo...

I do have a question : Did you feel it was dragged more because of the overly verbose/detailled narration, or because of the lack of interest of the events themselves ? Because my main conclusion when I reread my texts is that the narration tends to feel blocky, that it isn't fluid enough. That tir...

math and science are generally easiest of the subjects to do on the bus, since you don't have to write alot. Really depends on what order your classes are. I've been known to do english homework while in math class lol.

I liked it. The downs helped the ups feel higher. Good stories have both ups and downs. Just one or the other makes for a boring or depressing story. There's a few fanfic writers that could do better to keep that in mind.

I tended to do homework on the bus and lunch and between classes so I didn't have to do it at home lol.

That works sometimes, but my mother was relentless. Im kind of thinking of his mother as the same way as mine. She would NOT stop until I was in tears or out of her house unless I fought back. Its his decision to choose what he thinks is a good idea to deal with his mother, but his sounds a lot lik...

This makes me so sad. I dont know if you are doing the right thing by avoiding her. CONFRONT her about it, tell her to stop. You have good reason to be angry at her. If she keeps going, point out her flaws. Sure thats not a way to treat your parent, but what shes doing is not the right way to treat...

O.H.L., Your mom need professional help. She'll be able to learn ways to exercise her stress and pint up emotions in a more healthy manner than out-bursting at you. Her outbursts are only going to get worse as time goes on. The trick is figuring out how to get her to realize she needs it. Everyone i...

hate drawing hands huh?

beginner tip: Draw your own hand. Assuming you have two, stick your non dominant hand in a pose and draw it. do it a bunch of times in many different positions and varying amounts of detail. Then you'll be much more proficient at drawing simpler comic style hands afterwards.